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Band 4+: A chart shows the changes in the total population of England and Wales from 1700 to 2000 and changes in birth and death rates. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays a line graph with data from 1700 to 2000, tracking Population size (in million) on a left axis and Birth & Death Rate (per 1000 people) on a right axis, both scaled 0-60. Population size data points are: 1700 (~2.5), 1750 (~10), 1800 (~3), 1850 (~10), 1900 (~25), 1950 (~45), and 2000 (50). Birth rate data points (per 1000 people) are: 1700 (~30), 1750 (~40), 1800 (~40), 1850 (~32), 1900 (~30), 1950 (~22), and 2000 (~34). Death rate data points (per 1000 people) are: 1700 (~26), 1750 (~37), 1800 (~37), 1850 (~26), 1900 (~27), 1950 (20), and 2000 (20).

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A infographic illustrates the changes in the whole numer of population of England and Wales between 1700 to 2000 as well as the changes of the percentages of Birth and deaths.

Overview, in 1700, the population size was a significantly low. However, in 1900, the pupolation proportion was a dramatic shift to reaching 20 millions and it was keeping rise up to 50 millions in 2000. In contrast, In 1700, the birth and death percentages were keeping high number in pallarel and steadily reaching from 23 millions to 40 millions in 1750 till 1800, they were gradually decrease to 21 millions in 1950 and a dramatic shift up again.

From the over decaded years, the population size was extreamly increase over the time compared to decreasing percentages of birth and deaths. However, death percentage was soely drop consistantly.

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millions: 5

population: 3

percentages: 3

birth: 3

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Task Response

The report identifies some key trends in the data but contains inaccuracies and lacks detail. The language used is not always precise, and there are issues with grammar and vocabulary. To improve, focus on providing more specific data points and using more accurate language to describe the trends. Also, ensure that the overview provides a clear summary of the main trends. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The overview is not well-defined, and the transitions between different time periods and data points are abrupt. Paragraphing is not effectively used to separate ideas. To improve coherence, use clear topic sentences for each paragraph and ensure smooth transitions between sentences and paragraphs. Consider grouping information thematically (e.g., population trends, birth rate trends, death rate trends) to enhance clarity.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. There are instances of inappropriate word choice (e.g., "infographic" instead of "line graph", "numer" instead of "number", "pallarel" instead of "parallel", "soely" instead of "solely", "extreamly" instead of "extremely"). To improve lexical resource, use a wider range of vocabulary related to trends and changes (e.g., "increased significantly," "fluctuated," "remained stable"). Focus on using more precise and accurate language to describe the data.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and incorrect use of articles and prepositions. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. For example, "A infographic illustrates..." should be "A line graph illustrates...", and "the pupolation proportion was a dramatic shift to reaching 20 millions" is grammatically incorrect. To improve grammatical range and accuracy, focus on using correct verb tenses, ensuring subject-verb agreement, and using articles and prepositions correctly. Practice writing clear and concise sentences.

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