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Band 4+: A friend from another country is planning to visit your country in October or November for a week. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter recommend a city or town they could visit and give reasons for your recommendations say what clothes they may need to bring at that time of year suggest meeting your friend while they are in your country.

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Dear Tania,

I trust this letter finds you in good health. I am writing this letter to suggest you upcoming tour which you already made a plan to visit our country in October or November.

To begin with, I am very glad to hear your decision to explore our country. I recommend you to visit Coxesbazar sea Beach because, it is the largest sea beach in the world as well as number one tourist attractive destination in our nation. So if you visit this wonderful landscape you will get the real pleasure. Additionally, one things must remeber, to bring some heavy garments because theire will be cold and strom winds and put on waterproof footwear.

However, I am eagerly waiting to spent some quality time with you. I already made a plan to explore the sea beach again with you and enjoy the savory sea fish disheas which is mouthwatering.

I am looking forward to your coming and enjoy some memorable moments with you. Thank you for your planning to visit our country.

Your lovingly,

Shahinur.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

visit: 4

beach: 3

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Task Response

The letter partially addresses the task by recommending Coxesbazar sea Beach as a city or town to visit. However, it lacks depth in providing reasons for the recommendation and does not suggest meeting the friend while they are in the country. To improve, provide more detailed reasons for the recommendation and explicitly suggest meeting up during their visit.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is somewhat coherent but lacks cohesion. There are some issues with paragraphing, and the flow of ideas could be improved for better clarity. Try to organize the letter into more structured paragraphs and ensure a smoother transition between ideas.

Lexical Resource

There is an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but some words are used incorrectly or inappropriately. Work on expanding your vocabulary and using words more accurately. Additionally, aim for more sophisticated and natural language to enhance lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While there is an effort to use a variety of sentence structures, there are noticeable grammatical errors throughout the letter. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement, verb tense consistency, and sentence structure. Proofreading can help in identifying and correcting these errors.

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