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Band 5+: A friend of yours is going on holiday and has asked you to recommend a destination. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter recommend a good place that you have visited before for a holiday say where you went and where you stayed say what you can do there and what the food was like

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Dear Ann,

I hope this letter finds you well. I am thrilled to share one of my favourite holiday experiences in Kashmir- The Heaven Of India.

I would like to share some insights of it. We stayed at Hilton hill hotels for 3 nights and 4 days. This place was bit far from main city as I did not want to spent a lot on materialistic things. Though it was. Avery nice and comfortable hotel to stay in with family.

Over there we explored mesmerizing sceneries and mind blowing landscape. We enjoyed authentic food of Kashmir called Panipuri. It’s a sweet and savoury in taste and very delightful to have in snacks.

We had a small walk in local market as we wanted to explore some culture and its diversity. People over there’re very friendly in nature. We can easily gel into. If I would get a chance to revisit this place, I would absolutely say yes and I would definitely recommend this place to you.

All the best.

Maitri

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

would: 4

place: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter successfully addresses all aspects of the task, providing a clear and detailed recommendation. The information is well-organized and easy to follow.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter is generally coherent, but there are some minor issues with sentence structure and flow that make it slightly difficult to follow at times. The use of paragraphs is appropriate.

Lexical Resource

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, with some effective use of descriptive language. There are a few instances where more precise or sophisticated vocabulary could be used.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains a number of grammatical errors, which affect the overall clarity and fluency. There are issues with subject-verb agreement, tense consistency, and article usage.

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Band 5+: A friend of yours is going on holiday and has asked you to recommend a destination. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter recommend a good place that you have visited before for a holiday say where you went and where you stayed say what you can do there and what the food was like

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