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Band 6+: A friend of yours is going on holiday and has asked you to recommend a destination. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter recommend a good place that you have visited before for a holiday say where you went and where you stayed say what you can do there and what the food was like

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Dear Chris,

How’s your trip? I hope it was doing great! Well, I’ll give you a good place to visit. I hope you like it!

I know that you’re a big fan of nature, so I think mountain sounds good for you. To be honest, I just visited this mountain and you’ll interested in this place.

A few weeks ago I went to Bromo mountain in East Java Indonesia with my family. We can’t set the tend at Bromo, so we rent a homestay near the mountain.

In Bromo, there are so many attraction points like Teletubies Hill and Dead Forest. In Telebuties Hill, you hike until reach the top, and you can enjoy the beautiful landscape from there. In Dead Forest, you can barbecue with your trip mates. Don’t forget to taste the local dish near the Bromo, the food almost less spicy, so you will love it.

If you need others information, just reply this letter as soon as possible.

Your friend,

Rizki

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

bromo: 4

mountain: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter provides a good recommendation for a holiday destination, including details about the location, accommodation, activities, and food. The information is relevant and well-organized.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter is generally coherent, but there are some minor issues with sentence structure and flow. The use of paragraphs could be improved to enhance the overall clarity and cohesion.

Lexical Resource

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, with some effective use of descriptive language. There are a few instances where more precise or sophisticated vocabulary could be used.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains some grammatical errors, particularly in sentence structure and verb tenses. While the overall message is clear, these errors affect the fluency and accuracy of the writing.

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Band 6+: A friend of yours is going on holiday and has asked you to recommend a destination. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter recommend a good place that you have visited before for a holiday say where you went and where you stayed say what you can do there and what the food was like

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