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Band 5+: A friend of yours is thinking of going on a campaign in this summer for the first time. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday • describe some possible disadvantages • say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

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Dear Ramez,

How’re you? We haven’t met since our graduation party, and I hope everything is good. I’m writing not only to give you some useful tips but also to express my happiness that you finally will go for camping.

Since you was overwhelmed with this adventurous activity, I think you will enjoy every particular moment because you will experience new adventure, and I know quite well that you are a person who wants to do extraordinary time.

One of the expected negatives you will face is that you must be cautious about the extreme hot especially you will be in summer. Another disadvantage is that you have to be careful from insects bite so don’t forget to purchase ant-insect bite cream.

Finally, I am sad because I wouldn’t be able to to accompanied you as I have to attend my cousin’s wedding party. Also, my family and I already had booked luxurious restaurant as a part of celebration, and I am the responsible person who must be attend at that day.

Don’t forget to say hi to everyone, and enjoy as much as you can.If you need any tips, please give me a call.

Best Regards,

Mike

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Overall Band Score

5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

5.5

The letter partially addresses the task by explaining why the friend would enjoy a camping holiday and describing some possible disadvantages. However, the response lacks depth and development. It would be better to provide more detailed reasons for why the friend would enjoy camping and to expand on the disadvantages.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The message is somewhat coherent, but there are some issues with cohesion. The letter lacks a clear structure and the ideas are not consistently organized. Additionally, there are some abrupt shifts between ideas. It would be beneficial to use more cohesive devices and to organize the content into distinct paragraphs for better coherence and cohesion.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The vocabulary used is somewhat varied, but there are instances of imprecise word choice and awkward phrasing. It would be beneficial to use a wider range of vocabulary and to strive for more natural and sophisticated language use.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

There is an attempt to use a range of structures, but there are noticeable grammatical errors and inaccuracies throughout the letter. Additionally, there are issues with punctuation. It would be helpful to work on improving grammatical accuracy and punctuation for better clarity and coherence.

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