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Band 5+: A friend of yours is thinking of going on a campaign in this summer for the first time. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday • describe some possible disadvantages • say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

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Dear sienna,

After all, the day has come, when you at least thought about yourself! Taking a break from your hustly bustly schedule is the smartest decision you have ever made. I’m certain that this holiday for you would be the most memorable one,since the camping site in Mustang is incredible.It is like finding solace from our demanding and hectic lifestyle.

Although you may think you are fully prepared for camping you may miss out your basic necessities like fire supplies, you may take it as granted but without it you may not be able to enjoy the real essence of camping that is campfire and barbecue. The scenic beauty would be unimaginable, however, you need to be aware of wild animals at night. Take proper precautions .Furthermore, the chilling breeze may take your breath hence,be prepared with some warm attires.

Since you have shared your thought of camping I’m totally tempted to join you but unfortunately it’s like chewing iron grams. It’s impossible for me to avail leave from my workplace. Better luck next time.Enjoy!

Yours truly,

Sangita

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Overall Band Score

5
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.
Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
camping: 4
Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

5.5
The letter addresses all three points of the task by explaining why the friend would enjoy a camping holiday, describing some possible disadvantages, and stating whether the writer would like to go camping. However, the response could be more detailed and specific to each point to enhance the task response score.

Coherence & Cohesion

5
The letter is mostly coherent and cohesive, with ideas presented in a logical order. However, there are some minor issues with transitions between ideas and the overall flow could be improved. Additionally, the use of informal language like 'hustly bustly' may affect the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

5
There is a good range of vocabulary used throughout the letter. However, there are some inaccuracies and informal expressions that could be improved. Try to use more formal language and precise vocabulary to enhance the lexical resource score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5
The letter demonstrates a variety of sentence structures and grammatical accuracy. However, there are some punctuation errors and awkward phrasings that could be revised for better clarity and accuracy.

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