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Band 4+: A friend of yours is thinking of going on a campaign in this summer for the first time. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday • describe some possible disadvantages • say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

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Dear Abin,

I hope you are well, I know that you are thinking of going on a comping holiday for the worst time in this Summerland arthik It’s a very great decitions

lot I think you shootd enjoy a camping holiday. because after a weet working week comes holiday and it’s the best time for mental refreshment and Specially in this Sammer camping idealis the best idea.. One of the most important reson are you why you should go go camping is that you able to see the views of nature, also can see the and cenderstand the row Culture of our country whites you with hove never know befare.

One the other hand, going camping in Summer has some disadvantages. In the first placer it will have regi negative impact on your s were o Cap hat ‘skin. So, you have befar gomy out And the 2nd problem is easy for yo to be ill that’s why going comping you must take some medicines with you on You want to glad know thet I would also like to go comping with you in this summer because my holida in Summer is very w longuitosage

Hope to meet you Soon

Your close friend

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Overall Band Score

4

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

camping: 4

going: 3

comping: 3

holiday: 3

summer: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

5

The letter addresses the task but lacks clarity and coherence in some parts. The reasons for enjoying a camping holiday are mentioned, but the disadvantages are not clearly described. The response could be improved by organizing the ideas more effectively.

Coherence & Cohesion

4

The letter lacks coherence and cohesion due to frequent grammar and spelling errors, making it challenging to follow the message. Paragraphing is attempted but needs improvement for better structure and flow.

Lexical Resource

4

There is an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but many words are misspelled or used incorrectly, affecting the overall lexical resource. Work on improving spelling and word choice for a more sophisticated language use.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter has numerous grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement, tense consistency, and sentence structure issues. Punctuation is also inconsistent. Focus on improving grammar accuracy and sentence structure for better clarity and coherence.

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