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Band 5+: A local college want people with a job to come and talk to students about what it is like to work. You would like to do this. Write a letter to the principal of the college. In your letter • Explain what you would like to talk about • Say why students would be interested in your job • Suggest a possible date and time for the talk Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter for allowing me to be one of the alumni speakers in the upcoming placement fair at Northeastern College. I have been a student of Master’s in Analytics and I am currently working as a Business Analyst with Worley.

In my short speech, I would like to let me fellow junior students know the importance of practical knowledge over the theoretical part. I would like to share my experience of getting onboard for this job and also help them with certain significant tips and tricks to crack the interviews.

Being a Business Analyst is one of the most demanding careers today. It is an option for both technical and management students. Additionally, the job is well-paid.

Would it be possible to schedule my speech on April 4th, 10:00 am so that I can join my work post that?

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours faithfully,

Niyati

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B1 - Intermediate
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No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6.5

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5.5

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