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Band 5+: A local sports club is offering a free trial membership to new members. Write a letter to the club's membership officer to apply for the trial. You should include details about: which sport or activity you are interested in; why you want to join the club; what days and times you would be available to attend.

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Dear membership Officer,

i am writing to apply for the free trail membership at your sports club.i am practically interested in joining the tennis programme,as i have always enjoyed playing tennis and would like to improve my skills.

I would like to like join the club because i want to ake my self more physicaly active and meet new people.i belive your club provide a friendly environment where ii can develop my abilities aand enjoy some quality time.

I would be available to attend on Tuesday and Thursday evenings from 6:00 p.m. to 8:00 p.m. I am also available on Saturday mornings between 9:00 a.m. and 12:00 p.m.

I would be grateful if you could consider my application for the free trial membership. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

sayeed

Word Count: 133

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Overall Band Score

5
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.
Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
would: 4
membership: 3
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Task Response

6
The letter covers all the required points: it states interest in tennis, explains reasons for joining (improving skills, becoming active, meeting people), and provides specific availability. The tone is appropriate and the structure is clear. However, there are some minor lapses: a few spelling errors (e.g., 'trail' for 'trial', 'practically' for 'particularly', 'ake' for 'make', 'belive' for 'believe', 'aand' for 'and'), and some awkward phrasing (e.g., 'I would like to like join'). To improve, proofread for spelling and grammar, and ensure sentences are concise and natural. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

5
The letter is logically organized with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. However, the frequent grammar and spelling errors (e.g., 'trail' instead of 'trial', 'i' instead of 'I', missing punctuation) disrupt the flow and make it harder to follow. The use of paragraphs is adequate, but the errors in sentence structure and punctuation reduce the overall coherence. To improve, focus on writing clear, error-free sentences and ensure each paragraph has a single clear idea.

Lexical Resource

5
The vocabulary used is appropriate for the task (e.g., 'apply for the free trial membership', 'friendly environment', 'develop my abilities'), but there are several spelling errors (e.g., 'trail' for 'trial', 'practically' for 'actually', 'ake' for 'make', 'physicaly' for 'physically', 'belive' for 'believe', 'aand' for 'and', 'ii' for 'I'). These errors limit the range and accuracy of the lexical resource. To improve, proofread carefully and use a wider range of vocabulary to express ideas more precisely.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4
The letter contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb forms ('i am practically interested' should be 'I am particularly interested'), missing articles ('the tennis programme' is fine but 'a friendly environment' is used correctly), and punctuation issues (missing periods, capitalization errors). There are also awkward phrasings like 'I would like to like join' and 'ake my self more physicaly active'. These errors significantly affect the clarity and accuracy of the writing. To improve, review basic grammar rules, practice writing with correct punctuation, and use a variety of sentence structures.

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