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Band 4+: A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when you can attend an interview

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Dear sir / madam

i hope you are going well. i am writing this a letter because i have been seen an advertisements for waiter and waiterness in your loacl newspaper and l would like to apply for the waiter position

I am curently looking the would the wroking in your restaurant . because i am interesting this position because i enjoying working with people and helping customers.

I am believed i am suitable to this position because i am a friendly and polite , and hardwork , and i can work with team and follow the instruction carefully . I am also welling to learn new skills and gain experiences and work with flexible hours. I am understanding that good service is very important to make costumers happy.

I am available any day in the next week. preferably in the morning . please let me know if you need any more information about me .

thank you for your time and considerations . i look forward ti hearing from you soon .

your faithfully

taher jabbar

Word Count: 177

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

because: 4

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Task Response

The letter addresses the task by applying for the waiter position, briefly describing current activity, suitability, and availability for an interview. However, the response is limited in detail and contains several inaccuracies and omissions. The current occupation is not clearly stated, and the suitability section is generic and lacks specific examples. The interview availability is vague. To improve, provide a clear statement of your current job or study, give concrete examples of relevant experience or skills, and specify exact dates/times for an interview. Also, ensure all task points are fully developed and proofread for grammatical accuracy and clarity.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter has a logical structure with an introduction, body, and closing, but the flow is disrupted by frequent grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. The message can be followed, but with effort. Cohesive devices are limited and sometimes misused (e.g., 'because' repeated). Paragraphing is not effectively managed; the letter could be better organized into clear paragraphs for each purpose. To improve, use clear topic sentences and link ideas with a variety of connectors (e.g., 'Furthermore', 'In addition', 'Moreover').

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is basic and repetitive, with some inappropriate word choices (e.g., 'going well' instead of 'doing well', 'looking the would' instead of 'looking forward to working'). There is limited range, and errors in word form (e.g., 'hardwork' instead of 'hardworking') and collocation (e.g., 'gain experiences' instead of 'gain experience') are frequent. To improve, expand your vocabulary related to job applications and customer service, and practice using words in correct contexts.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains numerous grammar errors, including incorrect verb tenses (e.g., 'i have been seen' instead of 'I have seen'), subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'i are' implied), and missing articles (e.g., 'a letter' vs. 'this letter'). Punctuation is often incorrect (e.g., missing capital letters, incorrect use of commas). Sentence structures are mostly simple and repetitive. To improve, focus on basic sentence construction, verb tenses, and punctuation. Practice writing clear, correct sentences and then gradually incorporate more complex structures.

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