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Band 6+: An English-speaking friend has written to ask you for help in arranging accommodation in your town / city when he/she visits next month. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter • give details of some accommodation you think is suitable for him/her • suggest what your friend should bring with them • recommend some places for him/her to visit on the trip

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Hello Elizabeth.

I read your letter. You know, I’m glad you’re coming and I’ll do your bidding.

But I have some doubts. I don’t know what kind of acommadation suits for you. I have several suggestions for you regarding accommodation. you live alone, I do not recommend house with a courtyard. You may feel bored in small houses. I thought you should try high-rise buildings. They are very comfortable and cozy for one person. Also, in my city, such high-rise buildings are more and better than courtyards.

If you are coming for a longer period, take plenty of clothes with you. And if you don’t stay too long, you can find anything in my city and buy it at a low price. So don’t take too much. But one thing is that there is an electrical problem here. You should take some spare lights just in case.

I’ve listed a few places for fun and cultural entertainment that we can go to when you arrive. As following I will tell you some places. There is an amazing art museum 2 km from my house. You are very interested in art, so if you come, we will go together. Bye Eliz,I look forward to wait that you wil come.

With love Mubina.

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Overall Band Score

6

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

don't: 3

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Task Response

7

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The suggestions for accommodation, packing, and places to visit are present, although some aspects could be more detailed and persuasive.

Coherence & Cohesion

6

The letter's organization is somewhat disjointed. While the main points are covered, the flow could be improved with smoother transitions and more logical paragraphing. The grammar errors impact the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The vocabulary used is sufficient but lacks range and precision in places. More sophisticated vocabulary choices would enhance the letter's impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity and fluency. Improved grammatical accuracy is needed to achieve a higher score.

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