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Band 5+: An English-speaking friend has written to you to ask you how your English studies are going. Write a letter telling your friend about your progress. In your letter say what progress you are making describe the study methods and any materials you are using say what you find most difficult

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Dear Mimy,

As you know, I’ve been focusing in my English studies lately. My husband and I, are intersted in relocating to canda through entry express program. This program requires band 7 in the Ielts exam.

When I startes to take it seriously I discovered that I have a big issue in spelling. However, I believe that it’s getting better with time and practice. I’m using spaced repetition, AI tools, and I never skip an English related content on line.

In addition, I found a really useful Website called Daily Detection, it provieds Ielts related audios to detectate. there’s also writing9, I usually use it for prompets and questions.

Moreover, I had been into communication skills’ YouTube videos. I really think it might Untie the knote on my tongue. I’m focusing on fluency and expanding my vocablary, and it really helped me so far.

However the grammer is a bit challenging for me. due to the way I’ve learned this language so far, Which is very passive but I’m trying to break through it, so there is no room for giving up.

If you have any unusuall tips and trics, I’ll be gratful to learn about it.

Yours lovingly,

Rihab

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Task Response

The letter appropriately addresses all parts of the task, providing relevant and sufficient information about the writer's English studies. The progress, study methods, materials, and difficulties are clearly described. To further improve, ensure consistent accuracy in grammar and spelling throughout the letter.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent, but the organization could be improved. Consider structuring the letter with clearer topic sentences for each paragraph to guide the reader. Transition words could also be used more effectively to link ideas between sentences and paragraphs, enhancing the flow of the letter.

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The vocabulary used is generally appropriate, and there are some good attempts at idiomatic expressions ('untie the knot on my tongue'). To further enhance your lexical resource, try to incorporate a wider range of synonyms and more precise vocabulary related to language learning. For example, instead of 'big issue,' you could use 'significant challenge.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors throughout the letter that affect clarity. Focus on improving sentence structure, subject-verb agreement, and correct tense usage. Pay close attention to punctuation, especially commas and apostrophes. Review basic grammar rules and practice applying them in your writing.

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