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Band 4+: An old car was left on the street near your street several weeks ago. The car is now causing a problem for residents. Write a letter to the Council. In your letter: Describe the car Outline the problems it is causing Tell the Council what you want them to do about it You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Councilor,

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Dear sir/mam

I am writing this letter to you before I have do serval things do but no any action taken by yourself. I am local person of Bela residential, Mathura I have call to local council last week that there is a white seven seater car is parked in front of our resident from last ten days but council not take ang response regarding the problem.

We all resident members facing various challenges by the car major problem is going up and down from the road because of car is parked there moreover our vehicles also stuck because where the car is parked that is wrong place the place is the entrance of residents.

I have request to you to take any strict actions towards the problem otherwise we all members of society destroy the car after that know one have right to interfere it.

I hope you understand and take immediate action

Thank you

Yours truly

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Word Count: 159

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

parked: 3

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Task Response

The letter generally addresses the requirements of the task, but there are some issues with clarity and detail. The description of the car and the problems it's causing could be more specific. The tone is somewhat aggressive, particularly the threat to destroy the car, which is inappropriate for a formal letter to the council. To improve, focus on providing clear and specific details about the car and the problems it's causing, and maintain a polite and professional tone throughout the letter.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is somewhat unclear, and the flow of ideas is disrupted by grammatical errors. To improve coherence, focus on creating clear topic sentences for each paragraph and using transitional phrases to connect ideas smoothly. For example, you could start a new paragraph when you transition from describing the car to outlining the problems it's causing. Ensure each paragraph addresses a specific point from the task instructions.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and sometimes inaccurate. To enhance your lexical resource, try to use more precise and varied vocabulary related to the topic. For instance, instead of 'serval things do,' you could say 'contacted the council multiple times.' Instead of 'take any strict actions,' consider 'implement immediate measures.' Use a thesaurus to find synonyms and expand your word choice.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains frequent grammatical errors that impede understanding. Focus on improving sentence structure, verb tense consistency, and correct use of articles and prepositions. For example, 'I have call to local council' should be 'I called the local council.' 'Council not take ang response' should be 'The council has not taken any action.' Practice constructing grammatically correct sentences and proofread carefully.

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