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Band 4+: IELTS Essay Task 1: Transport Preferences Among Young People The bar chart below shows transport preferences among young people in four countries in a single year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows transport preferences among young people in four countries: Cars: The UK 60, United States 70, France 40, Italy 60; Motorcycles: The UK 20, United States 30, France 30, Italy 5; Bicycles: The UK 20, United States 10, France 50, Italy 35.

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In graph it basically illustrate the transport choice among young generation for car, motarcycle and bicycle in USA, France, Great Britain and Germany.

Can are the more preferred means of transport among young generation, except Germany. In Great Britain and USA there is a huge differences between percentages of people who choose kind of transport. As for motorcycle it was the least popular type of transport in all countries, except for the USA.

For car to use as a transport in France the rate exceeds to 75% whereas in Great Britain and USA the value slaps at 60%. If we look at the usage of motorcyle and bicycle among young generation USA has a slighter rate of 30% and 60%.

Wheres if we look at the use of motorycle and bicycle among young generation in USA they choose motarcycle over bicycle and, the people of Great britain gave more precentage on ussage of bicycle. Though the percentage whos the value is same for both transport means which is 30%. In France, the value of usa is nearly equal. In Germany, the percentage of people choosing car and bicycle is roughly the same.

Overall, car is the most choose transport, bicycle is un the second place and mototcycle is the least chosen transport.

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transport: 8

bicycle: 7

among: 4

young: 4

generation: 4

great: 4

britain: 4

france: 3

people: 3

choose: 3

value: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains several inaccuracies and inconsistencies. It misidentifies one of the countries (Germany instead of Italy) and provides incorrect data (e.g., France car usage at 75%, USA bicycle at 60%). The structure is somewhat disorganized, with repeated and unclear comparisons. To improve, ensure accurate data representation, use clear paragraphing (overview, main features, comparisons), and avoid vague or contradictory statements. Focus on selecting key trends and making precise comparisons.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report attempts to organize information but lacks clear paragraphing and logical flow. The introduction is unclear, and the body paragraphs mix data from different countries without a systematic approach. Transitions between ideas are abrupt, and the overall message is difficult to follow. To improve, use clear topic sentences for each paragraph, group data by country or transport type, and use cohesive devices (e.g., 'in contrast', 'similarly') to link ideas smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and often used inaccurately (e.g., 'slaps at', 'exceeds to', 'choose transport'). There is repetition of basic terms like 'young generation' and 'usage'. To improve, use a wider range of precise vocabulary related to data description (e.g., 'account for', 'constitute', 'significantly higher', 'notably lower') and avoid informal or incorrect expressions. Also, ensure correct spelling of key terms (e.g., 'motorcycle', 'percentage').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors and punctuation issues that impede understanding. There are problems with subject-verb agreement, article usage, prepositions, and sentence structure (e.g., 'In graph it basically illustrate', 'Can are the more preferred'). To improve, practice writing clear, grammatically correct sentences, use a variety of complex structures (e.g., relative clauses, comparatives), and proofread to correct errors. Focus on accurate use of tenses and pluralization.

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