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Band 4+: IELTS writing task 1 The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. ielts-academic-task-1-coffee-shop-sales Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The image displays a table representing sales data with four columns under the headers Coffee, Tea, Pastries, and Sandwiches and rows for different times of the day from 7:30-10:30, 10:30-2:30, 2:30-5:30, 5:30-8:30, with a total row at the bottom. The sales figures are: Coffee (7:30-10:30: 265, 10:30-2:30: 185, 2:30-5:30: 145, 5:30-8:30: 200, Total: 795), Tea (7:30-10:30: 110, 10:30-2:30: 50, 2:30-5:30: 35, 5:30-8:30: 75, Total: 270), Pastries (7:30-10:30: 275, 10:30-2:30: 95, 2:30-5:30: 150, 5:30-8:30: 80, Total: 600), and Sandwiches (7:30-10:30: 50, 10:30-2:30: 200, 2:30-5:30: 40, 5:30-8:30: 110, Total: 400). Total sales for each time slot are also provided (7:30-10:30: 700, 10:30-2:30: 530, 2:30-5:30: 370, 5:30-8:30: 465, Grand Total: 2065).

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The table illustrates the revenue from a coffee stall that is in an office building on a random weekend.

Overall, all product sales increased significantly in all time on weekday. Although cofee had higher earned rates, other foods experienced the most dramatic sales growth.

On 7:30 to 10:30 coffee accounted for the largest share sales,closely followed by pastries and tea. These three made the most sales on that day while sandwiches share a small revenue.By 10:30-2:30, sandwiches was the most selling food as on that period individuals like to take healthy food. Coffee still counted as second highest selling drink. Rest of two food share only 95 and 50 respectively.

On 2:30 to 5:30, pastries were replaced by sandwiches. It profited the paramount portion closedly to coffee that was 145. Tea and sandwiches contributed just 35 and 40.

At the end of the day, from 5:30 to 8:30, again coffee sales increaded at 200 compared to tea at 75, pasties at 80, and sandwiches 110. Total sales was 795 from coffee that was the largest contribution. Second highest was 600 that came from pastries.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

coffee: 6

sales: 5

sandwiches: 5

share: 3

pastries: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains several inaccuracies and logical inconsistencies that affect the overall quality. Firstly, the introduction incorrectly identifies the data as being from a 'weekend', whereas the task specifies a 'weekday'. Secondly, the overview claims that all product sales increased significantly across all time periods, which is factually incorrect based on the data provided (most categories actually show fluctuations or decreases). The report also includes speculative reasoning, such as suggesting people buy sandwiches because they are 'healthy', which is not supported by the data and should be avoided in Task 1. To improve, focus on accurately describing the trends shown in the table without adding outside opinions, and ensure that your overview correctly summarizes the main trends rather than making incorrect generalizations.

Coherence & Cohesion

The organization of the report is somewhat logical as it follows the chronological order of the time slots. However, the progression is hindered by frequent grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that force the reader to pause and re-read to understand the intended meaning. To improve, use more effective cohesive devices (e.g., 'In contrast,' 'Subsequently,' 'Regarding...') and ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic. Avoid jumping between data points without smooth transitions.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and often used incorrectly, which obscures the meaning. For example, terms like 'earned rates,' 'most selling food,' and 'profited the paramount portion' are unnatural in an academic report. There are also spelling errors (e.g., 'cofee', 'pasties', 'increaded'). Aim to use precise academic verbs for describing trends (e.g., 'peaked,' 'declined,' 'fluctuated') and nouns for categories (e.g., 'items,' 'products,' 'commodities'). Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are significant grammatical issues throughout the text, including subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'sandwiches was'), incorrect preposition usage (e.g., 'On 7:30 to 10:30'), and sentence structure errors. The writer attempts complex sentences, but they often fail due to poor control of grammar. Focus on mastering basic sentence structures, correct tense usage, and the proper use of articles and prepositions before attempting more complex structures.

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