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Band 6+: It is ten years since you left college. You'd like to organise an event to celebrate this anniversary with all your friends and classmates from college. Write a letter to one of your college friends. In your letter • say what kind of celebration event you'd like to organise • explain why you think it would be good to celebrate in this way • describe what help you need to organise this event

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Dear Nidhi,

How are you? I’m reaching out to you to tell you that I’m planning to celebrate my tenth anniversay of leaving college with all my near and dears.

I’m thinking about consulting a travel agency to book trip to goa for each of us.I’ll send digital invitation to everyone from our batch as you know we all are working and staying in different cities that’s why it’s not a feasible for me go to everyone’s house to invite them.I can picture their happiness after seeing my invitation of group trip.

Do you remember when we were in the last year of our college that time our college planned a trip for our class, but that got cancelled due to covid and we all were very dissappointed at that time.That’swhy I am planning this trip.

Your small help will be needed by me in terms of making digital cards which I’ll be sending to everbody.I remember during our college time you made birthday card for me using some application in your computer.I have an idea that your schedule is busy.Hopefully, you will manage to help me in organising this trip by making invitations.

Hope to hear from you soon.

Best Regards,

Amanpreet Kaur

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

college: 4

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Task Response

The letter appropriately addresses all parts of the task, clearly outlining the celebration event, the reasons for it, and the specific help needed. The tone is friendly and engaging. To further improve, consider adding more specific details about the trip to Goa, such as potential dates or activities, to make the invitation more enticing. Also, while the request for help is clear, elaborating on why Nidhi's specific skills are valuable could strengthen this section.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent, but the organization could be improved. Consider grouping related ideas together more explicitly. For example, you could dedicate a paragraph to explaining the reasons behind choosing a trip to Goa and another to detailing the specific help you need from Nidhi. Transition words could also be used more effectively to link ideas within paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in using more varied and precise language. For instance, instead of 'near and dears,' you could use 'close friends and family.' Try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary to express your ideas more vividly.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and appropriate article usage. For example, 'tenth anniversay' should be 'tenth anniversary,' and 'Your small help will be needed by me' could be phrased more naturally as 'I would appreciate your help.' Proofreading carefully before submitting will help catch these errors.

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