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Band 6+: It is ten years since you left college. You'd like to organise an event to celebrate this anniversary with all your friends and classmates from college. Write a letter to one of your college friends. In your letter • say what kind of celebration event you'd like to organise • explain why you think it would be good to celebrate in this way • describe what help you need to organise this event

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Dear Sarah,

I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to inform you that I am going to hold a party for our 10th anniversary this weekend. This gathering will be in a warm and intimate atmosphere and the goal is to spread joy and happiness together. It was a great pleasure meeting you and having you as my nearest and dearest throughout all these years. If it wasn’t for your supports, I would never have the chance to grow and succeed in my career.

We will be together in order to review our memories, especially funny ones and relieve stress. Therefore, there is no need to bring anything with yourself. However, I’ll be happy if you come an hour earlier so we can organize foods on the table before other guests arrive. I would be grateful if you could come at my place on Saturday evening around 4 pm.

Best regards,

Mobina

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter addresses the task but contains some irrelevant information and inaccuracies. The writer mentions holding the party this weekend, which doesn't allow for planning. The letter also lacks specific details about the type of celebration and why it's a good way to celebrate. To improve, provide more concrete details about the event, explain the reasons behind your choices, and be more specific about the help you need.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent, but the organization could be improved. The purpose of the letter is clear, but the transition between expressing gratitude and discussing the event details could be smoother. Consider dedicating a separate paragraph to each of the points mentioned in the task instructions for better clarity.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more varied and precise. Phrases like 'warm and intimate atmosphere' and 'spread joy and happiness' are somewhat generic. Try to use more specific and descriptive language to make the letter more engaging.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, 'If it wasn't for your supports, I would never have the chance to grow and succeed in my career' should be 'If it weren't for your support, I would never have had the chance to grow and succeed in my career.' Also, 'bring anything with yourself' is awkward; 'bring anything' is sufficient. Correcting these errors would improve the overall impression.

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