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Band 4+: It is ten years since you left college. You'd like to organise an event to celebrate this anniversary with all your friends and classmates from college. Write a letter to one of your college friends. In your letter • say what kind of celebration event you'd like to organise • explain why you think it would be good to celebrate in this way • describe what help you need to organise this event

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Dear Hashem,

I am writing this letter to let you know that we finish ten years sconce last time we saw our colleague in the collage,I would like to make a group chat with our classroom in the ways up to discuss how to celebrate this big event and share gifts and memories together.I really miss everyone special Jessica and Nadir i am curious about them relationships is they married or not?Moreover,i have lots of stories i would like to share it with all of you.Additionally the ways up group will help us to plane for our anniversary to make sure that everyone is coming .I have a cerbrise for all of you it is old letter Jessica wrote it it is a prediction for everyone future.We will have so much fun.

Looking forward for your replay and please consider my invitation positively.

Your Bestie,

Hayfa

Word Count: 146

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Overall Band Score

4.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

everyone: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses the task requirements and conveys the purpose of the event. However, there are some areas for improvement. The letter could benefit from more specific details about the proposed celebration, such as potential dates, locations, or activities. Additionally, the tone could be more consistently formal, and the organization could be improved for clarity. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is somewhat unclear, and the flow of ideas could be improved. Consider using more transitional phrases to connect your ideas and ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main point. For example, clearly separate the invitation, the reasons for celebrating, and the logistical arrangements into distinct paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally simple and appropriate, but there's room to enhance it with more varied and precise word choices. For instance, instead of 'big event,' you could use 'significant milestone' or 'special occasion.' Also, be mindful of using correct word forms (e.g., 'since' instead of 'sconce').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay close attention to verb tense consistency, subject-verb agreement, and correct use of articles and prepositions. For example, 'finish' should be 'finished,' and 'in the ways up' is unclear and should be rephrased. Proofreading carefully will help catch these errors.

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