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Band 5+: Map showing changes in the town of Denham from 1986 to the present day

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The image shows two maps of Denham, one from 1986 and one labeled "Present." In 1986, features include a bridge to the north, a road from west to east labeled "Road to city," a "River" flowing from north to east, "Shops" and "Post office" near the road intersection, a "Primary school" east of the post office, "Gardens" south of the shops, "Large house" further south, farmland to the east and west of the road, and a row of "Houses" along the southern road. In the present map, the layout includes the same river and road, "Post office," a larger "Primary school" building, more "Houses" replacing gardens, a "Retirement home" replacing the large house, more houses added along the road leading to the city, and a reduction in farmland.

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The maps represent a significant change of the geography of the town of Denham over the years with almost 40 years age gap between the two maps.

The first point of change that can be noticed with a little amount of observation is that the amount of houses in the city has extremely increased due to the population growth.

Additionally, they established some new facilities in town like the retirement house which is took place in the area was early occupied by the large house and the garden.

Another point of change that stores near the post office do not appear in the present day map probably because they closed and was replaced by houses.

The primary school in town got bigger with two extra buildings added in addition to that established two farm lands into the town.

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Task Response

The report identifies some changes but lacks detail and accuracy. The description is somewhat general and doesn't fully capture the specific transformations in Denham. To improve, provide more specific details about the changes, use accurate language, and ensure all key features and changes are addressed. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an adequate attempt to organize the information, but the flow could be improved. The introduction is a bit vague. Transitions between points could be smoother to enhance the overall coherence. Paragraphing is present but could be used more effectively to group related changes together. For example, discussing the changes related to housing in one paragraph would improve cohesion.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is generally appropriate but lacks sophistication. Phrases like 'a little amount of observation' and 'took place in the area was early occupied' are not the most effective choices. Using a wider range of vocabulary to describe the changes (e.g., 'expanded,' 'converted,' 'redeveloped') would improve the lexical resource. Consider using more precise language to describe locations and changes.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Examples include subject-verb agreement issues ('the amount of houses in the city has extremely increased'), incorrect verb tenses ('was early occupied'), and awkward phrasing ('established two farm lands into the town'). While a range of structures is attempted, control is inconsistent. Focus on improving accuracy in basic grammar and sentence structure to enhance the overall quality of the report.

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