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Band 7+: One of your friends lives in another country. You want to spend some time working in that country and would like some advice from your friend about job possibilities. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter say why you want to work in that country give some information about your skills and work experience ask some questions about employment in that country (e.g. hours, salary)

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Dear Tanveer,

Hey, I hope you’re doing great. I have been working with kids in Canada for a long time. Now, I am looking to open my own ECE school in Dubai for a new adventure. Since you are already based in Dubai, I believe your advice could be really valuable to me.

Firstly, could you please provide information on the required education or certifications and the approximate costs involved? Additionally, I am curious about the typical working hours for an ECE school in your country. Do you have any suggestions on expediting the process smoothly and efficiently? Any advice or ideas would be greatly appreciated.

Take care and I look forward to catching up with you later.

With love,

Kiran

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The letter fully addresses the task, clearly stating the purpose of writing and asking relevant questions. However, the writer could have provided more details about their skills and work experience to make the letter more informative. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

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The letter is well-structured and easy to follow, with each paragraph having a clear purpose. The writer uses cohesive devices effectively, but could improve by using more varied and sophisticated linking words and phrases.

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The writer uses a range of vocabulary, but it is not particularly precise or sophisticated. There are some simple and common words and phrases used, which could be replaced with more nuanced and formal language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The writer demonstrates a good range of sentence structures and uses grammar accurately, with only minor errors. However, there is room for improvement in using more complex sentence structures and varied punctuation.

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