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Band 6+: Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat. Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letter Explain the reason for the noise Apologize Describe what action you will take

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Dear Mrs. Shereen,

I have recieved your letter about the noise from my flat, and I am extremelly sorry for this. I did not expect the voice will reach your home and make you upset.

I will tell you about the reason of the noise, which you had heard. It was my son’s birthday, and I had invited some of his freinds from school to make surprise for him. They felt exited about the celebration,therefore their sounds seemed loud.

I hope you will accept my sincere apologies about that situation, I had taken in my consideration that the children may make some noise. So I invited just five of his closest friends, and I told them during the party to stay calm.

I usually keen on to do my best to not annoy any of my neighbours, but you felt upset about our party last time. Therefore, I will rent a small restaurant and I will invite my gusts there in such future occasions. Concequently, we will celebrate with out annoying any person.

I repeat my appologise again, and I hope this matter do not affect our neighbourhood.

Yours cincerely,

Fatima Hussen

Word Count: 192

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

about: 5

noise: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses all three required points: it explains the reason for the noise (a birthday party for the son), apologizes sincerely, and describes a concrete action to prevent future disturbances (renting a restaurant for future celebrations). The tone is appropriate and the letter is generally well-organized. However, there are some minor lapses in clarity and detail. For example, the explanation could be slightly more specific about the timing or nature of the noise, and the action taken could be more immediate (e.g., ensuring quiet hours). Additionally, there are a few spelling and grammatical errors (e.g., 'recieved', 'extremelly', 'freinds', 'exited', 'appologise', 'cincerely', 'I usually keen on to do my best') that slightly affect readability. To improve, proofread for spelling and grammar, and consider adding a more direct commitment to reducing noise in the immediate future.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is logically organized with clear paragraphs for the reason, apology, and action. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and minor lapses in cohesion (e.g., 'I will tell you about the reason of the noise, which you had heard' could be smoother). The overall message is easy to follow, but the transitions between ideas could be more natural.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, with some good attempts at formal language (e.g., 'sincere apologies', 'in such future occasions'). However, there are several spelling errors (e.g., 'recieved', 'extremelly', 'freinds', 'exited', 'appologise', 'cincerely') and some awkward word choices (e.g., 'voice' instead of 'noise', 'gusts' instead of 'guests'). A wider range of precise vocabulary would improve the response.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are multiple grammatical errors that affect clarity, such as 'I did not expect the voice will reach' (tense inconsistency), 'I usually keen on to do my best' (missing verb), 'I had taken in my consideration' (incorrect phrase), and 'I hope this matter do not affect' (subject-verb agreement). Punctuation is also inconsistent (e.g., missing commas after introductory phrases). While some complex structures are attempted, accuracy needs significant improvement.

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