Band 4+: Percentage of electricity production by fuel source in France in 1990 and 2010

The report attempts to address the task and provides an overview, but there are significant issues with data accuracy and consistency. While the instructions note that the visual description may be imperfect, the report contains internal contradictions and inaccuracies that make the trends difficult to follow. For example, the report mentions hydro power decreasing from 6% to 2%, which contradicts both the visual description and the earlier statement that it remained the same. Additionally, some figures provided in the body paragraphs do not align with the data presented in the overview or the visual description. To improve, ensure that all data points mentioned are consistent throughout the entire report and that the trends described accurately reflect the numbers provided. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

The report follows a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, the progression of ideas is occasionally hindered by awkward phrasing and grammatical inconsistencies. To improve, ensure that transitions between sentences are smoother and that the relationship between different data points is clearly articulated using cohesive devices (e.g., 'In contrast,' 'Similarly,' or 'While').

The vocabulary used is somewhat limited and repetitive. There are instances where word choices are imprecise or used incorrectly (e.g., 'settled at' or 'preferred'). To reach a higher band, aim to use a wider range of academic synonyms for describing trends, such as 'plummeted,' 'remained stable,' or 'constituted,' and ensure that the words used fit the formal context of a data report.

Grammatical errors are frequent and occasionally impede the reader's understanding. There are issues with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'nuclear power... have eventually grown'), tense consistency, and sentence structure (e.g., 'Coal and natural gas having similar percentages earlier have showed a drop later'). Focus on mastering complex sentence structures and ensuring that verb tenses are used correctly when describing past data.