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Band 4+: Percentage of electricity production by fuel source in France in 1990 and 2010

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The image shows two pie charts comparing the percentage of electricity production by fuel source in France for the years 1990 and 2010. In 1990, Coal was at 17%, Oil 27%, Natural Gas 22%, Hydro Power 20%, and Nuclear Power 14%. In 2010, Coal decreased to 13%, Oil significantly reduced to 13%, Natural Gas dropped to 10%, Hydro Power remained the same at 20%, and Nuclear Power surged to 67%.

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The following charts show the percentage of electricity production by fuel source in France in two year.

Overall, in 1990 Pie chart there is had the most percentage of electricity production by fuel source is coal and natural gas in split 28% and the least is hydro power around 6%. There was a slight increase in the proportion of production by coal and natural gas at France in 1990, where as hydro power was decreased.

By contrast, in 2010 the most precentage of electricity production is Nuclear power at 67%. However, Coal was drop to 13% same percentage with oil, while natural gas drop to 4%. Unfortunately, the least percentage of electricity production by fuel source in France is still be a hydro power but is drop to 2%. This pie charts are show the change of percentage of electricity production by fuel sources in France from 1990 to 2010.

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B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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production: 6

percentage: 5

electricity: 5

france: 4

power: 4

source: 3

natural: 3

hydro: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by comparing the two years, but it suffers from significant inaccuracies regarding the data provided in the visual description. The student reports figures (such as 28% for coal/gas or 2% for hydro power) that contradict the source information, which undermines the task achievement. Additionally, the overview is confusing and contains contradictory statements regarding trends. To improve, focus on accurately extracting the numbers from the charts and ensure that the overview clearly summarizes the main trends (e.g., the massive shift toward nuclear power) without misstating the data.

Coherence & Cohesion

The organization of the report is somewhat logical, following a chronological order. However, the progression of ideas is hindered by significant grammatical issues and awkward phrasing. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes used incorrectly. To improve, focus on using clearer transition signals (e.g., 'In contrast', 'Regarding', 'Moving to') and ensure that each sentence flows logically into the next without repetitive structures.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is quite basic and repetitive. There are several instances of incorrect word choices and awkward phrasing (e.g., 'is still be a hydro power', 'in split 28%'). To reach a higher band, aim to use a wider range of synonyms for 'show', 'increase', and 'decrease', and practice using more sophisticated collocations related to data description (e.g., 'accounted for', 'constituted', 'witnessed a significant rise').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and significantly impact the readability of the report. There are issues with subject-verb agreement, tense consistency (mixing present and past tense), and sentence structure (e.g., 'there is had the most percentage'). Many sentences are fragmented or incorrectly constructed. I recommend focusing on mastering basic sentence structures, particularly the use of the past tense for historical data, and ensuring that auxiliary verbs are used correctly.

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