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Band 4+: Recently you so an article in a newspaper or journal about the city or town and some of right a later to the regarding this in your letter you should tell how you know about the city or Town or what information was incorrect and what editor should do about this .

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Dear Sir,

I am writing in connection with the article you wrote in the Times newspaper on Monday. It was about the city rules that you have written incorrect.

To begin with, let me tell you let the article you have written about the city is my hometown. I live it for 15 years.Recently, I have shifted to another city for my future education love you have right the city is not clean in traffic rules is not follow but I think you hear the wrong information about it.

The city is clean and has nice places. Recently, I have visited to meet my parents on the weekend holidays for them what I can tell you there is a strictly followed traffic rules by the folks. If one does not follow these to fine for it.

I think you must visit once and take a selfie experience there. Then it will help to you write a correct information about the city and top of that I can give you more information about the new development in the city is my father is the manager of the City council.

Hope this letter will help you.

Yours faithfully,

Khushi sha.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

about: 5

rules: 3

information: 3

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Task Response

4.5

The letter attempts to address the task, but there are several issues with coherence and cohesion, lexical resource, and grammatical range and accuracy. The information provided about the city is not clearly presented, and the response lacks specific details about the incorrect information in the article and what the editor should do about it. Additionally, the letter does not fully demonstrate an understanding of the task requirements.

Coherence & Cohesion

3.5

The letter lacks coherence and cohesion. The ideas are not logically organized, and there are frequent errors in sentence structure and word usage. The paragraphing is not effectively managed, leading to a lack of clarity and coherence in the response. To improve, the writer should focus on organizing the ideas into clear paragraphs and using cohesive devices to connect the information more effectively.

Lexical Resource

3.5

The lexical resource is limited, and there are numerous inaccuracies and awkward word choices throughout the letter. The vocabulary is not used with precision, and there is a lack of variety in the language. To enhance the lexical resource, the writer should work on expanding their vocabulary and using words more accurately and appropriately. Additionally, attention to word forms and collocations would be beneficial.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The grammatical range and accuracy are inadequate. There are frequent errors in sentence structure, verb tense usage, subject-verb agreement, and punctuation. The letter also lacks a wide range of grammatical structures. To improve, the writer should focus on sentence structure, verb tense consistency, and punctuation. Additionally, practicing a variety of grammatical structures would be beneficial.

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