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Band 4+: Task 1: The bar chart below shows the number of miles travelled in a year by men and women for six different purposes in a particular country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows mileage trips made by men and women, measured in miles traveled per year: day trip women at ~1,500 miles and men at ~2,500 miles; entertainment women at ~3,500 miles and men at ~3,000 miles; meeting friends women at ~8,000 miles and men at ~7,000 miles; taking children to school women at ~8,000 miles and men at ~5,500 miles; shopping women at ~12,000 miles and men at ~9,500 miles; work women at ~32,000 miles and men at ~34,000 miles.

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The given bar graph illustrates information about the number of mileage trips by female and male in a year for various purposes in a particular country.

Overall,the biggest perportion of mileage trips is for work and the lowest perportion is for day trip.the most noticeable feature is the number of male is higher than female in day trip , entertainment and work while female is higher than male meeting friends,taking children to school and shopping.

To start off, the number of miles travelled in men who are go for day trip around 10,000 higher than women about 5000. Follow by entertainment in men at 15,000 higher than women around 2000 and in work men around 35000 higher than female 5000.

In contrast,the number of miles travelled in women for meeting friend , taking children to school and shopping are higher than male by approximate 25,000 , 26,000 and 26,500 respectively.

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higher: 6

number: 4

female: 4

around: 3

women: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains significant inaccuracies and a lack of clarity. The data is misinterpreted, leading to incorrect comparisons and proportions. The structure is somewhat present but lacks coherence and precision. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data from the bar chart, using precise figures and making correct comparisons. Ensure the overview captures the main trends accurately, and the body paragraphs provide specific details with correct values. Also, pay attention to the organization of information to ensure a logical flow.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The overview is weak, and the body paragraphs lack clear topic sentences and transitions. The information is not presented in a coherent manner, making it difficult to follow the main trends and comparisons. Paragraphing needs improvement to separate distinct ideas.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive. There is limited use of precise language to describe the data. The report would benefit from a wider range of vocabulary to express the information more accurately and effectively. For example, instead of repeating 'number of miles travelled,' try using synonyms or more specific terms related to travel and distance.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and punctuation mistakes. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. These errors significantly impede understanding. Focus on improving basic grammar and sentence construction to enhance clarity.

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