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Band 4+: Task 1: The pie charts show the proportion of users across different age groups on three apps:Twitter, Facebook and YouTube. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays three pie charts detailing user distribution by age group for Facebook, YouTube, and Twitter. For Facebook, the age group percentages are 10-17 at 14%, 18-34 at 29%, 35-49 at 30%, 50-64 at 19%, and 65+ at 8%. For YouTube, the proportions are 10-17 at 15%, 18-34 at 26%, 35-49 at 29%, 50-64 at 20%, and 65+ at 10%. For Twitter, the distribution is 10-17 at 9%, 18-34 at 40%, 35-49 at 29%, 50-64 at 18%, and 65+ at 4%.

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The pie chart illustrates information about the proportion of users in different age groups on three apps such as twitter, facebook and youtube.

Ovreall,the majority of users on twitter and facebook were in 18 and 34 age while youtube was on demand for 35-49 years. The least proportion of users in all this three apps were people around in 65 years.

Facebook and twitter showed the largest proportion of users in 18-34 age group. The age groups from 35 to 49 years and from 50 to 64 years in this both apps had a very minimal distinction,which is 1%.

Compared to other apps, the majority of users in youtube was a group of 35-49 years.Moreover,facebook and youtube represented the similar proportion in 10-17 age group.

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B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

users: 5

proportion: 4

twitter: 3

youtube: 3

years: 3

group: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the main requirements of the task and identifies key trends, such as the dominance of certain age groups and the low proportion of elderly users. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data interpretation; for instance, the report states that YouTube was 'on demand' for the 35-49 age group, which is slightly awkward phrasing, and it misses the opportunity to highlight the significant dominance of the 18-34 group on Twitter (40%). To improve, ensure that comparisons are more precise and that the overview clearly summarizes the most striking features of all three charts. Additionally, pay attention to grammatical accuracy and word choice to ensure a smoother flow of information. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a basic structure, but the progression of ideas is somewhat disjointed. While there is an attempt to group information, the transitions between sentences are abrupt. To improve, use a wider variety of cohesive devices (e.g., 'In contrast,' 'Similarly,' 'Regarding...') to link your observations more smoothly. Ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic to guide the reader.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is quite limited and repetitive. There are several errors in word choice and phrasing (e.g., 'youtube was on demand for 35-49 years' is not an appropriate way to describe user demographics). Try to use more precise academic vocabulary for describing trends and proportions, such as 'predominantly,' 'constituted,' 'accounted for,' or 'represented.' Additionally, ensure proper capitalization for brand names like Twitter, Facebook, and YouTube. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and occasionally impede the clarity of the message. There are issues with subject-verb agreement, article usage, and prepositional phrases (e.g., 'in this both apps' or 'in 18 and 34 age'). To improve, focus on mastering complex sentence structures and ensuring that your noun phrases (like age ranges) are constructed accurately. Pay close attention to punctuation, especially after introductory words like 'Overall' and 'Moreover'.

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