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Band 4+: The 2 maps show the changes that took place in Felixstone city between 1967 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words.

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The image shows two maps of Felixstone, one from 1967 and one from 2001, depicting the differences in land use over time. In 1967, the map includes a golf course, high street, farmland, dunes, hotel, cafe, marina, fish market, pier, and sea. In 2001, the map shows the addition of wind turbines, a car park, public and private beaches, swimming pool, and tennis courts, with the removal of the farmland, marina, fish market, and pier.

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The map shows how felixstone has changed year period from 1967 to 2001. Overall, witness redical changes is famland in1967 and in 2001, and marina in 1967 turned into beach with private and publish side for tourists.

In the1967 golf course and golf course in 2001 unchanged. But high street is changed. In the east one side of high street construct to apartments in 2001 , becouse in 1967 it was a shops. Farmland in the east in 1967 transform to sport area with two tennis court , one swimming pool and litlle hotel in the corner area.

Fish market under the farmland is demolished with marina. In 2001 they have private beach. Also in the west side conversion to publish beach to the visiters. Cafe in the north stay witһout expansion.But hotel is have redelopment with car park in 2001. In the west side near to sea built new white turbines from the front.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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Task Response

The report identifies some key changes between the two maps but includes some inaccuracies and omissions. The organization is generally clear, but the language contains errors that affect clarity. To improve, focus on accurately describing the changes and maintaining consistent language control.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and paragraphing. The flow of information is difficult to follow due to abrupt transitions and a lack of clear connections between ideas. Consider using more cohesive devices and organizing the information more logically, perhaps by area or type of development.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is limited and sometimes inaccurate ('witness redical changes'). There are also instances of incorrect word choice ('publish side' instead of 'public side'). Expand your vocabulary related to describing changes and locations. Focus on using more precise and varied language to describe the transformations. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('has changed year period'), subject-verb agreement issues ('Farmland in the east in 1967 transform'), and incorrect preposition usage ('in the east one side'). Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. Focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules and sentence construction. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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