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Band 7+: The bar chart above shows the popularity of well-known Instagram accounts in 2011 and 2021. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image is a bar chart titled "Instagram Influencers (in millions)" depicting followers count for 2018 in blue and 2021 in red for five individuals; Cristiano Ronaldo has 200 million in 2018 and 300 million in 2021, The Rock with 150 million in 2018 and 250 million in 2021, Ariana Grande with 175 million in 2018 and 250 million in 2021, Kylie Jenner with 125 million in 2018 and 200 million in 2021, and Selena Gomez with 150 million in 2018 and 200 million in 2021.

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The given bar chart illustrates the changes in Instagram influencers of certain popularities in 2018-2021. The most popular among them is Cristiano Ronaldo with more than three hundred million followers in 2021. While, the least popular is Selena Gomez, who has almost two hundred fifty million followers on Instagram at the same time.

In 2018, they all had approximately one hundred million followers on Instagram, but Selena Gomez had almost twenty-five million more than the others. Only The Rock and Kylie Jenner had fewer than one hundred million followers at that time.

In 2021, all of them except Cristiano Ronaldo had approximately 250 million followers on Instagram. While, Cristiano Ronaldo became the most popular with 315 million followers. By the way, Selena Gomez was the most popular in 2018 and became the least popular from that group of popularities in 2021.

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Overall Band Score

7.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

million: 7

followers: 6

popular: 5

instagram: 4

hundred: 4

cristiano: 3

ronaldo: 3

selena: 3

gomez: 3

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Task Response

The report provides a good overview of the main features of the chart, but it could be more precise in its comparisons. For example, it states that Selena Gomez had "almost twenty-five million more" followers than the others in 2018, but it would be more accurate to say that she had "approximately 25 million more" followers than Kylie Jenner and The Rock. The report also makes a few minor inaccuracies, such as stating that Selena Gomez had "almost two hundred fifty million followers" in 2021, when she actually had 200 million. Overall, the report demonstrates a good understanding of the information presented in the chart, but it could be improved by being more precise and accurate in its analysis. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized and easy to follow. The paragraphs are well-structured and the information flows smoothly from one paragraph to the next. However, there are a few instances where the report could be more cohesive. For example, the sentence "By the way, Selena Gomez was the most popular in 2018 and became the least popular from that group of popularities in 2021" could be better integrated into the previous paragraph. Overall, the report demonstrates good coherence and cohesion, but it could be improved by making a few minor adjustments to the flow of information.

Lexical Resource

6.5

The report uses a good range of vocabulary, but it could be more precise and sophisticated in its word choice. For example, the phrase "certain popularities" could be replaced with a more specific term, such as "influencers" or "celebrities." The report also uses some informal language, such as "by the way," which is not appropriate for an academic report. Overall, the report demonstrates a good command of vocabulary, but it could be improved by using more precise and formal language. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a wide range of grammatical structures and uses them accurately and appropriately. There are no significant grammatical errors.

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