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Band 5+: The bar chart below shows the average number of visitors who went to six types of attractions in Canberra, on a weekday and on the weekend, in 2019.

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The image shows a bar graph of daily visitors to Canberra attractions, with weekday/weekend averages: Parks (Weekday: 50, Weekend: 80), Shopping centres (Weekday: 60, Weekend: 80), Cafes and restaurants (Weekday: 100, Weekend: 140), Museums (Weekday: 30, Weekend: 40), Movie theatres (Weekday: 40, Weekend: 60), Libraries (Weekday: 20, Weekend: 30).

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The bar chart give information about the number of vistors, who visit six different places in Canberra, during a weekday or weekend in 2019.

Overall, the majority of peoples visits Cafes and Restaurants on a weekday and weekend. while the least figure shows for Libraries.

The highest proportion of vistors went to the Cafes and Restaurants in canberra during their weekday and on weekend, around 150 and 90 people go there. Meanwhile, the figure drop slightly for shopping centers almost 90 and 60 people go there on weekday and on weekend. The percentage increase for the vistors who went to the park on weekend days round about 100 and 50 for both days.

On the other hand, the figure drop dramatically for the the vistors who went to the museums, libraries, and movie theatres. moreover, the remaining 60 people visited to the museums in weekend and half of the amount visited on weekdays about 25 person. Likewise, this figure drop dramatically for the libraries around 40 and 30 peson visit there on weekday and on weekend.

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weekend: 7

weekday: 5

vistors: 4

figure: 4

about: 3

people: 3

there: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task, but there are some inaccuracies in the data reported and some issues with the organization and language. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data from the chart and organizing the information more clearly. Also, work on improving grammatical accuracy and vocabulary.

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The report demonstrates an attempt to organize information, but the flow is somewhat disrupted by abrupt transitions and a lack of clear connections between ideas. Paragraphing could be improved to group related information more effectively. Consider using cohesive devices (e.g., conjunctions, pronouns, synonyms) to link sentences and paragraphs more smoothly. For example, clarify the relationships between the different attractions and visitor numbers.

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The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive, which limits the precision and sophistication of the description. There are instances of imprecise word choice (e.g., 'peoples visits,' 'the least figure shows'). To improve, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to numerical data and trends (e.g., 'the majority,' 'the fewest,' 'increased significantly,' 'remained stable'). Focus on using synonyms and more specific terms to avoid repetition and enhance clarity.

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The report contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb forms ('peoples visits'), subject-verb agreement issues, and misuse of articles ('the vistors'). Sentence structure is also quite simple, which limits the ability to express complex relationships between data points. To improve, focus on mastering basic grammar rules and sentence structures. Practice using a variety of sentence types (e.g., complex sentences with subordinate clauses) to add nuance and detail to your descriptions. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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