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Band 5+: The bar chart below shows the number of employed persons by job type and sex for Australia last year Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image depicts a bar graph illustrating the number of employed persons by job type and sex in Australia last year, with blue bars representing males and pink bars representing females. Managers had 600,000 males and 300,000 females, professionals 800,000 males and 900,000 females, semi-professionals 500,000 males and 600,000 females, tradespersons 800,000 males and 100,000 females, production 500,000 males and 200,000 females, clerical 400,000 males and 800,000 females, and laborers 600,000 males and 200,000 females.

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The provided bar graph gives information about the proportion of different job positions between men and women in Australia last year.

Overall, it is evedent that most of the jobs are dominated by men population, with only two sectors having more women than men. The most popular job on the chart was clerical and the least one was labourer.

Looking at the graph it is clear that some jobs have marked differeces between gender employment, such as manager, production and tradespeople, being the last one, with the most gender disparity of all categories with 9 times more male than female workers.

At the same time, other jobs on the chart like semi-professionals and labourers showed a more balanced equity between both genders having a small difference that goes from 50.000 to 100.000 thousand

It is interasting to noticed that professional and clerical sectors are both dominated by female empoyers, with less than 100.000 thousand gap.

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The main features of the bar chart are identified, but there are some inaccuracies and omissions in the report. The comparisons between job types and genders are somewhat limited.

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