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Band 4+: The bar chart below shows the number of employed persons by job type and sex for Australia last year Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image depicts a bar graph illustrating the number of employed persons by job type and sex in Australia last year, with blue bars representing males and pink bars representing females. Managers had 600,000 males and 300,000 females, professionals 800,000 males and 900,000 females, semi-professionals 500,000 males and 600,000 females, tradespersons 800,000 males and 100,000 females, production 500,000 males and 200,000 females, clerical 400,000 males and 800,000 females, and laborers 600,000 males and 200,000 females.

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The data above displays variations in the Australian workforce by occupation and gender in the previous year.

overall, it can be observed that the total male employees is higher than the female employees. The number of male employed persons were higher in every sectors other than the professionals and clerical. The most female employees were from clerical sector and male employees from tradespeople.

Most of the employees were male except in professionals and clerical sectors. In tradespeople and production sectors, female employees were 100 with the lowest according to all the sectors. There were slight variations among male and female employed persons in professionals, semi-professionals and clerical sectors, but in other sectors it was considerably large.

Female employed persons in clerical sector was the highest among all the seven sectors with number of slightly less than 1000. From the male employed persons about 900 was in tradespeople which was the highest among male employees.

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The main features are adequately summarized, but there are some inaccuracies and omissions in the report. The comparisons are made, but some key details are missing.

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