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Band 7+: The bar chart below shows the number of tourists (in millions) who visited five different countries in 2019 and 2023. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image features a bar chart titled "Number of Tourists (in millions) Visiting Five Countries in 2019 and 2023". The vertical axis is labeled "Number of Tourists (millions)" with markers from 0 to 120 in increments of 20, and the horizontal axis categorizes five countries: France, USA, China, Spain, and Australia. The chart legend indicates two comparison years: 2019 and 2023. For France, tourist numbers are 89 in 2019 and 110 in 2023. For USA, tourist numbers are 79 in 2019 and 93 in 2023. For China, tourist numbers are 65 in 2019 and 85 in 2023. For Spain, tourist numbers are 45 in 2019 and 64 in 2023. For Australia, tourist numbers are 30 in 2019 and 41 in 2023.

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The bar chart illustrates the number of people who traveled to five major countries in two years: 2019 and 2023.

It is noticeable that the number of tourists increased in these countries simultaneously in 2023. Over 65 million and 85 million tourists visited France, the USA, and China respectively in 2019 and 2023. Spain and Australia welcomed over 30 million and 40 million tourists accordingly in 2019 and 2023.

France dominated with 89 million visitors in 2019 and had an increase of almost 20 million tourists in 2023. In second place, the USA experienced a 14 million increase in visitors in 2023, reaching 93 million tourists. China welcomed 85 million newcomers in 2023 and had a 20 million raise.

Spain and Australia had 45 and 30 million tourists respectively in 2019. While Spain experienced around a 20 million raise, Australia faced just a 10 million increase in tourist numbers in 2023.

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million: 13

tourists: 6

australia: 3

increase: 3

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Task Response

The report adequately addresses the task by describing the main trends and making comparisons between the two years. It correctly identifies that tourist numbers increased in all five countries and highlights the leading position of France. However, there are some inaccuracies and unclear phrasing, such as the statement about 'over 65 million and 85 million tourists visited France, the USA, and China respectively' which is confusing and not entirely accurate. Additionally, the phrase 'China welcomed 85 million newcomers' is misleading, as it suggests that all 85 million were new, whereas the figure represents the total for 2023. The report could be improved by presenting the data more clearly and avoiding ambiguous statements. Overall, the main features are covered, but there are minor lapses in clarity and precision.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is logically organized and easy to follow, with a clear introduction and a body that groups countries by magnitude. However, the second sentence in the overview is somewhat confusing and could be rephrased for clarity. The use of cohesive devices is adequate, but there is room for more sophisticated linking and referencing to improve the flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is appropriate and generally accurate, with some good use of synonyms (e.g., 'welcomed', 'dominated', 'experienced'). However, there are a few imprecise word choices, such as 'newcomers' and 'raise' (instead of 'rise' or 'increase'), which slightly reduce the lexical precision. A wider range of less common vocabulary and more varied phrasing would enhance the report.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures and is largely accurate. There are minor issues, such as the use of 'raise' as a noun and a slightly awkward sentence in the overview, but these do not impede understanding. Overall, the grammar is controlled and appropriate for the task.

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Band 7+: The bar chart below shows the number of tourists (in millions) who visited five different countries in 2019 and 2023. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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