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Band 5+: The bar chart below shows the percentage of households in four countries (USA, Canada, Germany, and Mexico) with internet access in the years 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image presents a bar chart displaying household internet access percentages for the years 2000 and 2010 across four countries: USA: 2000 at 50%, 2010 at 70%; Canada: 2000 at 60%, 2010 at 80%; Germany: 2000 at 70%, 2010 at 90%; Mexico: 2000 at 30%, 2010 at 40%.

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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of users internet access which used by household in differents four countries (USA, Canada, Germany, and Mexico) between in 2000 and 2010. Overall all the figures increased significantly during the period.

Looking firstly at 2000, Germany was the largest shared at 80%. The second place were Canada and Mexico are just below 60%. Meanwhile the lowest percentage was USA nearly below 40%.

Secondly, in 2010, Gemany had increased to approximately 85%, followed by Canada and Mexico around 75%. Moreover, USA was the smallest percentage in about 45%.

To sum up, graph was shown used internet from 2000 to 2010, Germany always had dominated during the period, while Canada and Mexico almost the same, the smallest figure and the uncommon data which accounted was USA .

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canada: 4

percentage: 3

germany: 3

mexico: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task but contains inaccuracies in the data reported from the chart. The organization is present but could be improved with a clearer structure. The language contains errors that affect clarity. To improve, focus on accurately reporting the data, structuring the report more effectively (e.g., by grouping countries or years), and using more precise language. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates some attempt at organization, but the flow of information is not always smooth. The introduction and conclusion are present but lack detail and precision. Transitions between paragraphs could be improved to enhance coherence. For example, the shift from the overview to the details of each year feels abrupt. Consider using more cohesive devices to link ideas and improve the overall flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is somewhat limited and contains inaccuracies. There are instances of imprecise word choice (e.g., "largest shared," "uncommon data"). To improve, focus on using more precise and varied vocabulary to describe the data. Consider synonyms for words like 'percentage,' 'increased,' and 'smallest' to add depth to your descriptions.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Errors include incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and incorrect preposition usage. For example, "users internet access which used by household" and "Germany was the largest shared" contain grammatical errors. To improve, focus on reviewing basic grammar rules and proofreading carefully for errors in sentence structure and verb tense consistency.

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