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Band 6+: The bar chart below shows the percentage of households in four countries (USA, Canada, Germany, and Mexico) with internet access in the years 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image presents a bar chart displaying household internet access percentages for the years 2000 and 2010 across four countries: USA: 2000 at 50%, 2010 at 70%; Canada: 2000 at 60%, 2010 at 80%; Germany: 2000 at 70%, 2010 at 90%; Mexico: 2000 at 30%, 2010 at 40%.

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The line graph illustrates the information about scale of households whom has an opportunity and access to use internet in 3 different regions namely: Mexico, USA, and Canada over the 10 year period from 1998 to 2008.

Overall, internet access has greatly influenced the way we see and do things that we would have been impossible to even imagine before, and all 3 countries experienced a significant growth in internet industry and access to it.

In 1998, USA had an highest percentege in this year, it was approximately 45%, and in the next dacade it remained its highest position with 85%. Similarly, Canada had the same pace in increasement. It started from 35% and reached it’s maximum in 2008 with 75%. In this 10 year period both USA and Canada boosted their percentage to 40%.

In contrast with USA and Canada, Mexico was in lowest position in 1998; Until 2004, Mexico had a slight growth from 20% to 38%. However, internet access has significantly boosted its temp and reached its maximum in 2008 with 68%

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B2 - Upper Intermediate
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access: 4

internet: 4

canada: 4

mexico: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task, providing an overview of internet access trends in the three countries. The overall trends are identified, and some specific data points are mentioned. To improve, focus on providing more precise data and avoiding generalizations. Also, ensure that the introduction and overview are concise and directly relevant to the graph's content. The report contains some inaccuracies, such as the graph type and the data values. Proofread carefully to avoid these errors.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an adequate attempt to organize the information, but the flow could be improved. The introduction and overall statement are present, but the body paragraphs lack clear topic sentences to guide the reader. Transitions between sentences and paragraphs are sometimes abrupt, affecting the overall coherence. Consider using more cohesive devices to link ideas and improve the logical progression of information.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a sufficient range of vocabulary to convey the information, but there are instances of imprecise word choice ('scale of households whom has an opportunity', 'boosted their percentage to 40%'). Expanding your vocabulary and focusing on using more precise language would enhance the clarity and impact of your writing. Also, avoid informal language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report exhibits a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but grammatical errors are noticeable and impact clarity. Errors include incorrect verb forms ('households whom has'), subject-verb agreement issues, and misuse of articles and prepositions. While the overall meaning is generally clear, addressing these grammatical errors would significantly improve the accuracy and readability of your writing.

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