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Band 5+: The bar chart below shows the percentages of New Zealand smokers in the age group 18 - 25 years, for the period 2014 - 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows percentages of New Zealand smokers aged 18-25 related to three tobacco products from 2014-2018: for E-cigarettes, 2014 - 1%, 2015 - 3%, 2016 - 7%, 2017 - 12%, 2018 - 16%; for Cigarettes, 2014 - 15%, 2015 - 17%, 2016 - 16%, 2017 - 15%, 2018 - 14%; for Cigars, 2014 - 3%, 2015 - 4%, 2016 - 5%, 2017 - 6%, 2018 - 5%.

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The bar char illustrates the proportion of smoker aged 18-25 who smoked different types of tobacco in New Zealand brtween 2014 and 2018.

overall, the highest proportion for f smoker smoked Cegarattes, while the parcentage of smoker sho smoked Cigars were the lowest throughout the period.

According to the bar chart, the higest proportion ow smoker smoked cigarettes in 2014, at approximately 17%. This figar followed a continueous decreasing trend between 2017 to 2018, dropping from nearly 15% to just below 13%. However, this figure fsintly increased to 14% by 2018. On the other hand, just below 5% of smoker smoked E-cigarettes in 2014. Also this figure followed a increasing trend and raised to 5% before significantly increased to over 15# by 2018.

In terms of cigar, in 2014 above 5 % of smoker smoked it. this figure grew to anmost 7% in 2017. Although the proportion rapidly increased to 10% in 2018, and again decreased to 5% by 2018.

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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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smoker: 6

smoked: 6

proportion: 4

figure: 3

increased: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and includes an overview, but it contains several inaccuracies and inconsistencies in the data. For example, the figures for cigarettes and e-cigarettes are misreported, and the description of the cigar trend is confusing and contradictory. The report would benefit from a clearer and more accurate presentation of the main trends and comparisons. Additionally, there are numerous spelling and grammatical errors that affect clarity. Focus on accurately reporting the data and ensuring the report is coherent and well-structured.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs, but the flow is disrupted by frequent errors and unclear referencing. The overview is present but could be more precise. Paragraphing is attempted but not consistently managed, and some sentences are confusing due to incorrect data descriptions. To improve, ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea and use cohesive devices more accurately to link ideas and data points.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and contains several spelling errors (e.g., 'brtween', 'parcentage', 'higest', 'figar', 'continueous', 'fsintly', 'anmost'). There is some attempt to use a range of expressions (e.g., 'illustrates', 'proportion', 'followed a decreasing trend'), but the errors and repetitive phrasing reduce clarity. To improve, expand your range of topic-specific vocabulary and ensure correct spelling and word forms. Use synonyms to avoid repetition and describe trends more precisely. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement ('smoker' vs 'smokers'), incorrect verb tenses, and missing articles. Punctuation is often incorrect (e.g., missing capital letters, run-on sentences). There are also issues with prepositions and word order. To improve, focus on sentence structure, subject-verb agreement, and proofreading for punctuation. Practice using a variety of complex structures accurately.

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