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Band 5+: Task 1 The pie charts below show the breakdown of household expenditures in capital cities of the UAE, Turkey and Russia, in 2023. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents three pie charts detailing percentage breakdowns of household expenditures in three cities: Dubai, Istanbul, and Moscow, for 2023. In Dubai, housing accounts for 34%, food 15%, transportation 14%, entertainment 13%, healthcare 10%, and other 14%. In Istanbul, housing is 24%, food 26%, transportation 10%, entertainment 6%, healthcare 5%, and other 29%. In Moscow, housing is 43%, food 12%, transportation 10%, entertainment 3%, healthcare 5%, and other 27%.

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The pie charts provide key infromation about the expenditures of household breakdown for five sectors in Dubia, Istanbal and Moscow in 2023. The figures are measured in percentages.

Overall, it is clear from the graphs that housing recorded the highest proportion in Dubia and Istanbal, while food appeared the most consumed in Moscow. In addition, transportation represnted similar percentage in all countries.

According to what is shown, The UEA spent around 34% in housing, followed by food by nearly a quater, then transportation, entertainment and healthcare by 15%, 14%, 13% respectively.

In terms of Turkey and Russia other expenditures recorded same percentage, a double in healthcare spending in Turkey. While housing stood the higher compared to others in Turkey’s expenditure by 43%, whereas Moscow spent the largest on the food by 37%, and other sectors showed small proportion.

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The report addresses the task and presents an overall trend, but it contains several inaccuracies and omissions. For instance, it incorrectly states that housing was the highest in Istanbul (it was food) and that Moscow spent the most on food (it was housing). Additionally, the report omits specific data for several categories and misinterprets some figures. To improve, ensure that all main features are accurately reported and that comparisons are clear and correct. Also, proofread for spelling and grammatical errors (e.g., 'infromation', 'Dubia', 'Istanbal', 'represnted'). The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs, but the flow is disrupted by unclear referencing and abrupt transitions. For example, the phrase 'According to what is shown' is vague, and the second body paragraph jumps between countries without clear signposting. To improve, use more explicit cohesive devices (e.g., 'In contrast', 'Similarly') and ensure each paragraph focuses on a clear set of comparisons. Also, avoid introducing new information in the conclusion without a logical link.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task but limited in range and precision. There are spelling errors (e.g., 'infromation', 'Dubia', 'Istanbal', 'represnted') and some awkward phrasing (e.g., 'the expenditures of household breakdown', 'food appeared the most consumed'). To improve, use more precise and varied vocabulary (e.g., 'accounted for', 'constituted', 'was the largest category') and ensure correct spelling of city names. Also, avoid repetition of 'spent' and 'percentage'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a mix of simple and complex sentences, but there are several grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. For example, 'The UEA spent around 34% in housing' should be 'The UAE spent around 34% on housing', and 'a double in healthcare spending' is unclear. There are also subject-verb agreement issues and missing articles. To improve, review basic grammar rules (e.g., prepositions, articles) and proofread for errors. Using a wider range of structures, such as passive voice and comparative forms, would also enhance accuracy and flexibility.

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