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Band 4+: The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Location of dance classes Community halls & other 18% 目 Private -studios 48% School halls (after-school) 24% College-based studios 10% Types of dance classes (by age group) Under 11 11-16 Ballet Tap Modern 100 200 96 →p. 136 300 400 Number of students 500 600 700

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Image for topic: The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Location of dance classes Community halls & other 18% 目 Private -studios 48% School halls (after-school) 24% College-based studios 10% Types of dance classes (by age group) Under 11 11-16 Ballet Tap Modern 100 200 96 →p. 136 300 400 Number of students 500 600 700

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The image shows a pie chart and a bar chart; the pie chart indicates that 50% of dance classes are at private studios, 30% at local community centers, 10% school halls, and 10% college-based; the bar chart details that for ages 5-11 and 12-18, ballet classes have 400 and 550 students respectively, jazz has 450 and 550, tap dance has 250 and 500, and modern dance has 250 and 400 students.

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The pie charts and bar graph illustrates some data about currently location and types of dacne that attedinding young people in a town in Australia.

Overall, the largest amount visiting is private studios and it can be seen that it is very popular among children. As for types, the ballet in great request for children under 11, while 11-16 age people like modern

First of all, the privat studios takes up almost half of total (48%), others space for dance takes 52%. College-based studios the least popupar only 10%, whereas after school section location amounts to 24%. The last location is commuity halls & other that takes up 18% of 100%

In terms of dance disciplines, there are only three types and two age group. 600 under 11 students go to ballet activities, while 11-16 only 300. The tap falls somewhere in the middle in terms of popularity, approximately 440 youger students and 410 older students, respectively. The lasst one is well-liked for for teenagers,whereas this is the least popular option.

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types: 3

studios: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains several inaccuracies and omissions. The overall trend is mentioned, but specific data is often incorrect or vague (e.g., '600 under 11 students go to ballet' vs. the actual 400, and 'approximately 440 younger students' for tap vs. 250). The report also omits the 'modern' dance category and misrepresents the number of dance types. Additionally, there are numerous spelling and grammatical errors that affect clarity. To improve, focus on accurately reporting the main features, include all categories, and proofread for language accuracy.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a basic structure with an introduction, an overview, and paragraphs for each chart, but the flow is often disrupted by unclear references and abrupt transitions. The overview is somewhat vague and does not clearly summarize the main trends. Cohesive devices are used inconsistently, and some sentences are difficult to follow due to grammatical errors. To improve, ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea, use a range of linking words appropriately, and proofread to eliminate errors that hinder readability.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and repetitive, with some inappropriate word choices (e.g., 'visiting' instead of 'attendance', 'popupar' instead of 'popular', 'commuity' instead of 'community'). There is an attempt to use some descriptive language, but it is not always accurate or natural. To improve, expand your range of topic-specific vocabulary (e.g., 'proportion', 'enrolment', 'prevalent'), use precise terms, and avoid informal or incorrect expressions. Also, ensure correct spelling throughout.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'pie charts and bar graph illustrates'), incorrect verb forms (e.g., 'that attedinding'), and missing articles. Sentence structures are often simple and repetitive, with limited use of complex constructions. Punctuation is also problematic. To improve, practice writing with a variety of sentence structures, review basic grammar rules (especially subject-verb agreement and tense consistency), and carefully proofread your work to correct errors.

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