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Band 7+: The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Location of dance classes Community halls & other 18% 目 Private -studios 48% School halls (after-school) 24% College-based studios 10% Types of dance classes (by age group) Under 11 11-16 Ballet Tap Modern 100 200 96 →p. 136 300 400 Number of students 500 600 700

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Image for topic: The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Location of dance classes Community halls & other 18% 目 Private -studios 48% School halls (after-school) 24% College-based studios 10% Types of dance classes (by age group) Under 11 11-16 Ballet Tap Modern 100 200 96 →p. 136 300 400 Number of students 500 600 700

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The image shows a pie chart and a bar chart; the pie chart indicates that 50% of dance classes are at private studios, 30% at local community centers, 10% school halls, and 10% college-based; the bar chart details that for ages 5-11 and 12-18, ballet classes have 400 and 550 students respectively, jazz has 450 and 550, tap dance has 250 and 500, and modern dance has 250 and 400 students.

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The pie chart and table give information about the location and type of dance classes for young children in a town.

Overall, private studios account for the largest proportion. It can be clearly seen that the smallest share is college-based studios, while the table shows that ballet is common, followed by modern dance being common for specific age groups.

Private studios make up the biggest share, with 48%, whereas school halls account for 24%. Community halls and other represent a considerable proportion at around 18%, while college-based studios represent a minor share at 10%.

According to the table, the number of students in the under-11 age group is higher, reaching about 600, whereas the 11-16 age group shows a lower figure of around 300. Students dancing tap showed equality in number of students. Modern dance was more common for students aged 11-16, reaching around 510, rather than students aged under 11, which accounted for 300.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and presents some relevant information from both charts. However, there are inaccuracies and omissions that affect the overall quality. The report could be improved by providing more accurate data and ensuring all key features are addressed. For example, the report inaccurately states that the number of students in the under-11 age group is higher, reaching about 600, whereas the 11-16 age group shows a lower figure of around 300. Also, the report could benefit from a clearer structure and more precise language.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear overview and supporting details. However, the connection between the pie chart and the bar chart could be strengthened to improve the flow. For instance, you could link the location of classes to the types of dance preferred at those locations, if the data allows for such inferences. Also, in the final paragraph, the statement about 'students dancing tap showed equality in number of students' is unclear and disrupts the flow. Clarifying this statement or rephrasing it to better connect with the surrounding information would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary suitable for the task. Terms like 'account for the largest proportion,' 'considerable proportion,' and 'minor share' are used effectively. To further enhance the lexical resource, consider incorporating more specific vocabulary related to trends and comparisons, such as 'predominantly,' 'significantly higher,' or 'comparatively fewer.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report exhibits a strong command of grammar with very few errors. The sentence structures are varied and appropriate for the task. While the grammar is accurate, ensure that complex sentences are constructed with precision to avoid any potential ambiguity. For example, the sentence about modern dance could be slightly restructured for clarity.

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