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Band 4+: The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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The image presents numerical data regarding Ashdown Museum visitors and their satisfaction surveys, with 74,000 visitors before refurbishment and 92,000 in the year after. Pie charts illustrate satisfaction levels: before refurbishment, 40% were dissatisfied, 30% satisfied, 15% responded very satisfied, 10% very dissatisfied, 5% gave no response; after refurbishment, 35% satisfied, 35% very satisfied, 15% dissatisfied, 5% very dissatisfied, 10% no response.

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The table compares the total numbers of visitors at Ashdown Museum in the year before and year after it was refurbished, while the pie illustrates survey of visitors’ satisfaction in both years.

Looking from an overall perspective, both pie charts has risen satisfaction significantly, while dissatisfaction decreased considerably.

According top the table, museum attracted more people after the refurbishment. Visitor numbers have grown from 74,000 to 92,000 in the following year.

The satisfaction survey also illustrates the improvement of the visitor’s enjoyment. Satisfaction and dissatisfaction have been reversed year after. And no response remained the same with 5 percent. It is clear that overall satisfaction categories are increased considerably after it was refurbished. T

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satisfaction: 5

after: 4

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Task Response

The report addresses the main features of the data, including the increase in visitor numbers and the overall shift in satisfaction levels. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions: the 'no response' percentage is incorrectly stated as 5% (it is 10% after refurbishment), and the report does not mention the specific percentages for 'very dissatisfied' or the exact changes in satisfaction categories. Additionally, the phrasing is sometimes unclear (e.g., 'both pie charts has risen satisfaction') and there are minor grammatical errors. To improve, ensure all key data points are accurately reported and use clearer, more precise language. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure, but there are issues with paragraphing and logical flow. The introduction is adequate, but the overview is somewhat vague and not fully developed. The body paragraphs lack clear topic sentences and the progression of ideas is not always smooth. For example, the sentence 'Satisfaction and dissatisfaction have been reversed year after' is unclear and disrupts the flow. To improve, use clear paragraphing with one main idea per paragraph, and ensure each paragraph has a clear topic sentence and logical development. Also, use cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas within and between sentences.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate but limited in range and flexibility. There are some attempts at using appropriate terms (e.g., 'refurbished', 'satisfaction', 'dissatisfaction'), but the report lacks sophistication and precision. For example, 'pie illustrates survey' is awkward, and 'visitor's enjoyment' is not the most precise term. To improve, use a wider range of vocabulary related to data description (e.g., 'proportion', 'percentage', 'significant increase', 'notable decline') and ensure word choices are natural and accurate. Avoid repetition and use synonyms where appropriate.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. For example, 'both pie charts has risen' should be 'both pie charts show a rise' or 'both pie charts have risen', and 'According top the table' should be 'According to the table'. There are also issues with subject-verb agreement and sentence structure. The final sentence is incomplete ('T'). To improve, focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures with accuracy, ensure subject-verb agreement, and proofread to eliminate errors. Use complex sentences appropriately and ensure punctuation is correct throughout.

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