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Band 4+: The charts below show the performance of a bus company in terms of punctuality, both actual and target (what actually happened compared to what the company was trying to achieve), and the number of complaints and passengers.

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The image contains two bar graphs, the top graph titled "Percentage of services arriving on time (actual and target)" shows the percentage of services arriving on time each year in blue bars for actual and orange bars for target from 1999 to 2003; the actual percentages are 83%, 83%, 85%, 83%, and 84%, while the target percentages are 85%, 85%, 85%, 85%, and 85% respectively. The bottom graph, titled "Number of complaints (per thousand passenger's journeys)", shows the number of complaints per thousand passenger journeys each year from 1999 to 2003, with the number of complaints being 120, 100, 40, 100, and 120 respectively.

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The bar charts illustrates the performamce of bus transport service in the form of their time management ,simultaneously compared number of complaints appears during their services .

Overall ,rate of of bus time managemnt highest in both year 1999 and 2000 as well as got huge number complaints aginst bus service in 2003.

First of all , from 1999 to 2003 there is flactuate actaul percentage . in 1999 very highest rate of acual panctuality and nearly same percetage of real time between 2001 and 2003 but exception n 2000 were very lowest rate of real time management. correspondingly target time reached peak in 1999 and 2000 was about 86% and in the same from 2001 to 2003 rate of targeted time were remian same reached nearly 83 percent.

in addtion , the highest number of compalint appeared in 2003 around 120 cases , and the lowest number of objection got in 1999 exceptiioon rates from 2000 to 2002 were flactuate the ratio during that periodThe charts below show the performance of a bus company in terms of punctuality, both actual and target (what actually happened compared to what the company was trying to achieve), and the number of complaints and passengers.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by describing the two charts, but it contains several inaccuracies and omissions. For instance, the actual punctuality percentages are misreported (e.g., stating 1999 and 2000 were highest, while the data shows 2001 was highest), and the target percentages are incorrectly described as fluctuating when they remain constant at 85%. The complaint data is also inaccurately presented, with the lowest number incorrectly attributed to 1999 instead of 2001. Additionally, the report omits the number of passengers, which is part of the task. The writing is disorganized and contains numerous spelling and grammatical errors that hinder clarity. To improve, focus on accurately reporting the main trends and comparisons, ensure all key data is covered, and proofread for language accuracy.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report attempts to organize information into paragraphs, but the flow is often disrupted by unclear referencing and abrupt transitions. The overall message is difficult to follow due to missing logical connectors and inconsistent use of cohesive devices. To improve, use clear topic sentences, link ideas with appropriate transition words (e.g., 'in contrast', 'similarly'), and ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea. Also, avoid repeating the same information and ensure that comparisons between actual and target performance, as well as complaints, are clearly structured.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is limited and repetitive, with several spelling errors (e.g., 'performamce', 'flactuate', 'compalint', 'aginst') and inappropriate word choices (e.g., 'very highest', 'remian same'). There is some attempt to use synonyms (e.g., 'punctuality', 'time management'), but the range is narrow and lacks precision. To improve, expand your vocabulary for describing trends (e.g., 'fluctuate', 'remain stable', 'peak', 'decline') and use more precise terms. Also, proofread to eliminate spelling errors and ensure correct word forms.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement issues (e.g., 'charts illustrates'), incorrect verb tenses, and missing articles. Sentence structures are often incomplete or run-on, and punctuation is frequently incorrect, which severely affects clarity. To improve, practice writing simple, accurate sentences before attempting complex structures. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement, use of articles, and correct verb forms. Also, ensure each sentence has a clear subject and predicate, and use punctuation (e.g., full stops, commas) appropriately to separate ideas.

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