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Band 4+: The charts below show the performance of a bus company in terms of punctuality, both actual and target (what actually happened compared to what the company was trying to achieve), and the number of complaints and passengers.

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The image contains two bar graphs, the top graph titled "Percentage of services arriving on time (actual and target)" shows the percentage of services arriving on time each year in blue bars for actual and orange bars for target from 1999 to 2003; the actual percentages are 83%, 83%, 85%, 83%, and 84%, while the target percentages are 85%, 85%, 85%, 85%, and 85% respectively. The bottom graph, titled "Number of complaints (per thousand passenger's journeys)", shows the number of complaints per thousand passenger journeys each year from 1999 to 2003, with the number of complaints being 120, 100, 40, 100, and 120 respectively.

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The two bar charts illustrate the percentage of services arriving on time includes actual and target, and the number of complaints per passenger’s journey.

Overall, the period between 1999 and 2000, percentages of services chart showed a peak level of performance in target figure, while target section dropped dramatically at end of the period. Chart of complaints experienced a gradual fluctuation.

Considering chart of bus services, company achieved target at 86% in 1998, followed by 2000, same level of percentage accounted. Next twice of years, proportions of target was decreased slightly by 1% to 85%, and remained at 84.5% in 2003. In the early stage, actual punctuality was discovered at 85%, falling roughly at 82% in next year. Again rose by 84.5%, after two years, actual punctuality improved gradually, approximately 84.7% in 2003.

According to chart of complaints, initially, 70 thousands passengers complaints were received, rising complaints to 100 thousands in next year Number od complaints recorded in 2001 about 82 thousands and upcoming years complaints was increased sharply. In 2002, 110 thousands complaints collected, and 120 thousands complaints remarked in end of the period.

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Task Response

The report attempts to address all parts of the task, but there are significant issues with data accuracy and clarity. The overview contains contradictions (stating the target dropped dramatically when the data shows it remained stable) and the description of the complaints chart does not align with the provided visual description (using 'thousands' when the unit is 'per thousand journeys'). While the report identifies trends, the inaccuracies in reporting the specific figures and the inconsistent use of years (e.g., mentioning 1998 when the data starts in 1999) detract from the overall achievement. To improve, focus on precisely interpreting the units of measurement and ensuring that the trends described match the visual evidence provided.

Coherence & Cohesion

The organization of the report is somewhat logical, but the progression of ideas is frequently interrupted by awkward phrasing and grammatical errors. The use of cohesive devices is limited and often feels forced or incorrect. To improve, focus on using clearer transition signals (e.g., 'In terms of...', 'Regarding...', 'By contrast...') and ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic. Avoid starting sentences with fragments; ensure every sentence has a subject and a verb to maintain a smooth flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is often repetitive or used incorrectly, which obscures the intended meaning. There are several instances of improper word choices (e.g., 'target section dropped', 'actual punctuality was discovered', 'complaints remarked'). To improve, work on learning collocations related to data description, such as 'reached a peak', 'remained steady', or 'showed a downward trend'. Aim for more precise academic vocabulary to describe changes in data.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and significantly impact the readability of the report. There are issues with subject-verb agreement, tense consistency, article usage, and sentence structure (e.g., 'Next twice of years', 'Number od complaints recorded in 2001 about 82 thousands'). Many sentences are fragmented or poorly constructed. To improve, focus on mastering basic sentence structures (Subject + Verb + Object) and practice using complex sentences with subordinating conjunctions (e.g., 'while', 'although', 'whereas') to compare data points accurately.

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