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Band 4+: The bar chart shows the amount of foreign direct investment in India and China from 2014 to 2019. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image is a bar graph depicting Foreign direct investment in China and India from 2014 to 2019, representing Capital expenditure ($bn). For China, the following data points are shown: 2014 ($70bn), 2015 ($80bn), 2016 ($60bn), 2017 ($100bn), 2018 ($60bn), 2019 ($40bn). For India, the data is as follows: 2014 ($20bn), 2015 ($60bn), 2016 ($40bn), 2017 ($20bn), 2018 ($40bn), 2019 ($60bn). The graph notes these figures include announced and/or launched greenfield projects and includes estimates. The source of the data is FDI Markets.

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The bar graph below give a comparision of abroad direct investment in India and Chins with timeline from 2014 to 2019.

Overall, China, usually dominated, India, except 2015, had less investment from other countries. Also we can see big difference in 2014 and 2018, in favor of China.

This bar chart illustrates to us the domination of Chinese in six years except 2015. At the start China started with up to 80 billion dollars. However, it became less and less, doing China less attractive for enclosure in foreign countries.At the end, China had approxiamately 50 billion dollars. In addition, in 2015, China had a few less enclosure than India had.

On the contrary, Indians were always less attractive for inclosure. India , in 2014, had 20 billion and hesitated over years. But, in the end Indians had approxiamately same amount of money. In addition, in 2015, they has more inclosure than chinese. In 2018, they feel dropped on comparasion with China.

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The report uses a limited range of vocabulary, and there are several instances of inaccurate word choice ('abroad' instead of 'foreign', 'enclosure' instead of 'investment'). The vocabulary is not used effectively to convey the information in the graph. To improve your lexical resource, focus on learning more synonyms and using a wider range of vocabulary to describe the data. Pay attention to the correct usage of words and avoid using words that are not appropriate for the context.

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