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Band 6+: The bar chart shows the number of times per week (in 1000s), over five weeks, that three computer packages were downloaded from the internet.

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The image displays a bar chart comparing weekly downloads (in 1000s) of three computer packages (ActiveX, Java, Net) over five weeks. ActiveX downloads: Week1 - 55; Week2 - 80; Week3 - 70; Week4 - 120; Week5 - 130. Java downloads: Week1 - 30; Week2 - 50; Week3 - 40; Week4 - 70; Week5 - 90. Net downloads: Week1 - 40; Week2 - 40; Week3 - 60; Week4 - 90; Week5 - 110.

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The bar chart provides information regarding the number of downloads registered by three computer packages namely, ActiveX, Java and Net over a five-week period.

Overall, all three witnessed different trends with ActiveX experiencing fluctuations and Java undergoing constant drop whereas Net first dipped gradually and rose back again with no sudden changes.

It can be seen that ActiveX was the most popular in the first week, around 70 thousand users downloading it. In the subsequent 2 weeks, it rose consistently to 110 thousand becoming the only package to reach triple digits. Following this, it pulled back by about 10 thousand the next week. The last week, ActiveX was at over 120 thousand, ultimately reaching its peak.

Regarding Java and net, they were quite close in number with a bit over and under 40 in the initial week. But, it was followed by an increase in gap when Java Rose to 55 thousand and net dropped to approximately 30 which was only widened in the third week with 20 and 60 thousands respectively. In week 4 and 5, they both increased and Java was at 80 thousand while Net managed to reach 50.

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activex: 4

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Task Response

The report addresses the task, but there are inaccuracies in the data description. For example, the report states that ActiveX was around 70 thousand in the first week, but the visual description indicates 55 thousand. Also, the report mentions Java undergoing a constant drop, which is incorrect. To improve, ensure the data is accurately represented and avoid misinterpretations.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report presents a generally clear overview of the data, but the organization could be improved for better flow. Consider structuring the body paragraphs to discuss each computer package individually across the five weeks, or to compare the packages week by week. The overall trends are identified, but transitions between specific data points could be smoother. For example, the shift from ActiveX to Java and Net in the third paragraph feels somewhat abrupt. Using more cohesive devices (e.g., 'In contrast,' 'Similarly,' 'However') would enhance the connections between ideas.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for describing the data, but there's room for more precise and varied language. Instead of repeatedly using 'rose' or 'increased,' try incorporating synonyms like 'climbed,' 'surged,' or 'ascended.' Similarly, for decreases, consider 'declined,' 'dropped,' or 'fell.' While the report avoids direct copying of terms from the task, expanding the range of descriptive vocabulary would elevate the writing. Also, be careful about using specific numbers when the visual only provides approximate values.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains grammatical errors and phrasing issues that affect clarity. For example, 'Java undergoing constant drop' is not grammatically correct; it should be 'Java undergoing a constant drop' or 'Java experiencing a constant decline.' Similarly, 'Net first dipped gradually and rose back again with no sudden changes' could be phrased more clearly as 'Net initially decreased gradually before rising again without any sudden changes.' Pay close attention to verb tense consistency and subject-verb agreement. Proofreading carefully for these errors will improve the overall accuracy of the writing.

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