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Band 5+: The bar chart shows the percentage of drug company's total sale, per region, from 2002 to 2006.

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The image is a bar chart displaying drug company's total sales percentages, per region, 2002-2006; 2002: Asia 12%, Europe & Africa 44%, North America 33%, South America 11%; 2003: Asia 10%, Europe & Africa 45%, North America 28%, South America 7%; 2004: Asia 10%, Europe & Africa 48%, North America 21%, South America 6%; 2005: Asia 24%, Europe & Africa 44%, North America 21%, South America 11%; 2006: Asia 24%, Europe & Africa 40%, North America 25%, South America 11%.

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The given bar chart provides information about the percentage of a drug company’s total sales, which included four different countries between 2002 and 200, over a period of 4 years. Units are measured by percentage.

Overall, it can be seen that the European and Africa had the highest number of sales, while the South Africa had the lowest value.

In the beginning, in 2002, the Asia was stayed at 12%, which followed an increasing trend, accounting for 20%, 22%, 24%, and 28%, during the period. However, the European and Africa was about 44%, and it increased to 45% and 48%, in 2003 and 2004. Then, the percentage remained stable, at around 44%, which was followed a decline to 40% in 2006.

in addition to this, the North America stayed at 33%, following a decreasing trend to 28%, 24%, 21% over the period, respectively. After that, the South America had a least figure of company’s sale among three countries, at approximately 11% in 2002. Finally, it reaching a decreased to 7%, and 6%, respectively.

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task and covers the main trends, but there are significant issues with accuracy and data presentation. There is a confusion between 'regions' and 'countries,' and the report incorrectly identifies 'South Africa' as a region. Furthermore, the data provided in the report often contradicts the visual description (for example, the values for Asia and the final figures for South America do not align with the provided data). To improve, ensure that the data cited matches the visual information accurately and focus on grouping information logically to highlight comparisons between the regions rather than just listing numbers.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure, but the progression of ideas is occasionally hindered by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. While you use cohesive devices like 'Overall', 'In the beginning', and 'In addition to this', they are sometimes used incorrectly or lack the sophistication required for higher bands. To improve, ensure that your transitions between sentences and paragraphs feel natural and that your overview clearly summarizes the main trends without getting bogged down in minor details.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is somewhat repetitive and contains several inaccuracies. For example, you refer to 'countries' when the data describes 'regions', and you confuse 'South Africa' with 'South America'. There are also issues with word choice, such as 'the least figure' instead of 'the lowest figure'. To improve, focus on using precise terminology related to geography (regions vs. countries) and data description (e.g., 'fluctuated', 'peaked', 'remained steady'). Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and sometimes impede the reader's understanding. There are issues with article usage (e.g., 'the Asia', 'the European and Africa'), verb tense and form (e.g., 'was stayed', 'it reaching a decreased'), and sentence structure. You attempt a variety of structures, but the control is not consistent. I recommend reviewing subject-verb agreement, the correct use of definite articles, and the formation of complex sentences using participle clauses or relative clauses.

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