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Band 5+: The bar chart shows the percentage of elderly citizens in three countries in 1980, 2000, and 2030. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image depicts a bar graph showing the percentage of population aged 65 or over in Canada, Germany, and the UK for the years 1980, 2000, and 2030. Canada's data: 1980 - 10%, 2000 - 15%, 2030 - 25%. Germany's data: 1980 - 15%, 2000 - 20%, 2030 - 30%. UK's data: 1980 - 15%, 2000 - 15%, 2030 - 25%.

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The bar chart below illustrates the rates of people aged 65 or above across different countries in 1980, 2000 and 2030.

Overall it can be seen that the proportion of people aged 65 or above is predicted increase over the whole period.

The Germany ranked first in term of population with aged 65 ot above according the table. In 1980 the percentage of adults with aged 65 ot above was little less than 15%, then raised gradually to 20% in 2000 and percentage will continue to raise to 25% in 2030.

In Canada the percentages of adults aged 65 or above accounted for over 10% in 1980, after it continued to rise over 15% in 2000 and it predicted rise a little more 20%.

The proportion of UK adults aged 65 or above was at 15% in 1980 and unchanged 20 years, finally the population in Great Britan are expected to climb approximately to 20% in 2030.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the percentages of the population aged 65 or above in Canada, Germany, and the UK for the years 1980, 2000, and 2030. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions in the data interpretation.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The report is mostly coherent and cohesive, with a clear overall structure. However, there are some issues with paragraphing and some awkward phrasing that affect the flow of the report.

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There is a good range of vocabulary used, but some inaccuracies and repetitions are present. More precise and varied vocabulary could enhance the lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

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A variety of sentence structures are attempted, but there are errors in grammar, punctuation, and tense consistency throughout the report. More attention to accuracy is needed.

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Band 5+: The bar chart shows the percentage of elderly citizens in three countries in 1980, 2000, and 2030. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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