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Band 5+: The bar chart shows the percentage of the world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2003, and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The image presents a bar chart comparing percentages of the total world population in India, China, USA, and Japan for years 1950, 2003, and projected for 2050: India shows ~15%, 17%, and 19% respectively; China indicates ~23%, 20%, and 15% respectively; USA demonstrates ~7%, ~5%, and consistent ~5% respectively; Japan represents ~4%, ~3%, and ~1% respectively.

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The chart illustrates the human life precentage in India, China, USA, and Japan for three years in 1950, 2003 and for the future life in 2050.

Overall, India population was rose significantly while others declined steadliy throughout the period. Despite this, the total population in China was higher than any other countries.

The top two countries with biggest population in every period is nominated by India and China, China get the first place and followed by India. The amount of population in china and India is more than 50. But the difference is India population increase steadily from 15 and approximately close to 20 in the projections for 2050. Beside that, China is slowly falling back and estimated will reach 15 in 2050.

On the other hand, the two lowest population is held by USA and Japan. Their amount precentage is below half in every year. USA and Japan have similar pattern, they becoming lower in 1950, 2003 and for 2050 too. But the difference is Japan get the lowest precentage between all of this country, Japan never reach five precentage in every year.

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india: 6

china: 6

population: 6

japan: 5

precentage: 4

every: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the main trends and making comparisons between the countries. However, there are several inaccuracies and unclear statements that detract from the overall clarity. For example, the phrase 'India population was rose significantly' is grammatically incorrect, and the statement 'The amount of population in china and India is more than 50' is vague and potentially misleading. Additionally, the report incorrectly states that USA and Japan 'becoming lower in 1950, 2003 and for 2050 too,' which is not entirely accurate for the USA, as it remains consistent. To improve, focus on precise data reporting, use clearer language, and ensure all statements are supported by the visual information.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, an overview, and body paragraphs. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear references (e.g., 'the amount of population in china and India is more than 50' is vague). The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate, and paragraphing could be improved to separate key trends more clearly. To improve, use a range of linking words and phrases (e.g., 'in contrast', 'similarly', 'whereas') and ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary (e.g., 'illustrates', 'projections', 'steadily', 'declined'), but there are frequent errors in word choice and collocation (e.g., 'human life precentage', 'nominated by', 'amount precentage'). The range of vocabulary is limited, and some terms are repeated. To improve, use more precise and varied vocabulary (e.g., 'proportion', 'accounted for', 'predicted to', 'experienced a decline') and ensure correct spelling and word forms.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement ('India population was rose', 'China get'), incorrect verb forms ('was rose', 'becoming lower'), and missing articles/prepositions. Sentence structures are mostly simple, with limited use of complex sentences. To improve, practice using a variety of sentence structures (e.g., relative clauses, conditionals) and review basic grammar rules, especially verb tenses and agreement. Proofreading for punctuation and spelling is also recommended.

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