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Band 5+: The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image features a 3D vertical bar chart titled "Scores by Team per Season", with the y-axis labeled "Points" showing increments of 0pt, 17pt, 34pt, 51pt, 68pt, and 85pt, and the x-axis labeled "Season" covering the years 2002, 2003, 2004, and 2005 for three teams: Team A, Team B, and Team C. In 2002, scores are: Team A: 5pt, Team B: 82pt, and Team C: 10pt. In 2003, scores are: Team A: 11pt, Team B: 60pt, and Team C: 15pt. In 2004, scores are: Team A: 35pt, Team B: 43pt, and Team C: 12pt. In 2005, scores are: Team A: 8pt, Team B: 55pt, and Team C: 5pt.

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Presented bar chart shows results scored by 3 teams (A, B and C) in terms of four seasons 2002 – 2005.

It is clear from the graph that team B steadily scores the highest amount of points among all 3 teams. On the other hand, during season 2004 team A shows the most significant increase in scored points out of each team.

Overall, between season 2002 – 2005 team B repeatedly shows the highest result: 82 points in season 2002, 50 points in season 2003, 43 points in season 2004 and 55 points in season 2005. Through all 4 seasons, team B scores tend to remain stable. In addition, it does not show any trend in season 2002-2004. On the other hand, team A and C show an upward trend that season. Result for team B reached slightly on the last year, as for other teams their results dropped.

Result scored by team A reaches it pick in season 2004 with 35 points. The score grew more than three times compared to season 2000 when it was only 13 points. It is the most remarkable increase among all seasons. However, team A experienced a huge drop of 22 points in season 2003 when it reaches it pick scoring 13 points but compared to other seasons the surge is not as dramatic as one that team A shows.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A1 - Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

season: 11

points: 10

shows: 4

seasons: 4

other: 4

scored: 3

teams: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the main trends and comparing the teams' scores across the seasons. However, there are several inaccuracies and inconsistencies in the data (e.g., Team B's score in 2003 is stated as 50 instead of 60, and Team A's scores are misreported as 13 points in 2003 and 2004). The report also contains some irrelevant or confusing statements, such as referencing 'season 2000' which is not in the task, and the final sentence is unclear. To improve, ensure all data is accurately reported and focus on clear, logical comparisons without introducing extraneous information.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs, but the flow is disrupted by unclear referencing and abrupt shifts between ideas. For example, the phrase 'it does not show any trend in season 2002-2004' is vague, and the final paragraph introduces a comparison to 'season 2000' which is not part of the data, causing confusion. To improve, ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea and use cohesive devices (e.g., 'in contrast', 'similarly') to link sentences and paragraphs more smoothly. Also, avoid introducing irrelevant information that distracts from the main message.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary (e.g., 'steadily', 'significant increase', 'remarkable increase'), but there are instances of imprecise word choice and repetition. For example, 'scores' is used repeatedly, and 'pick' is used instead of 'peak'. Additionally, phrases like 'reached slightly on the last year' are awkward. To improve, expand your range of synonyms (e.g., 'points', 'performance', 'figures') and use more precise terms (e.g., 'fluctuated', 'peaked', 'declined'). Ensure that all vocabulary is used accurately and naturally in context. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a mix of simple and complex structures, but there are several grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that affect clarity. For instance, 'Presented bar chart shows' should be 'The presented bar chart shows', and 'it reaches it pick' should be 'it reaches its peak'. There are also issues with subject-verb agreement and tense consistency. To improve, proofread carefully for subject-verb agreement, use of articles, and possessive pronouns. Vary sentence structures more, and ensure that each sentence is grammatically complete and clear.

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