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Band 4+: The bar chart below shows the number of male and female fans of five K-Pop bands in Mongolia in 2024.

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The image shows a bar chart titled 'Number of K-Pop Fans', detailing the number of male and female fans of five K-Pop bands in Mongolia in 2024. The data is as follows – BTS: male fans approximately 7,300, female fans approximately 9,300; BLACKPINK: male fans approximately 6,500, female fans 12,000; EXO: male fans approximately 5,300, female fans approximately 4,800; SEVENTEEN: male fans approximately 8,200, female fans approximately 7,400; TWICE: male fans approximately 4,700, female fans approximately 8,200.

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The bar chart illustrates the number of boy and girl fans of BTS, BLACKPINK, EXO, SEVENTEEN AND TWICE bands in Mongolia in the year in 2024.

Overall, Blackpink had the highest number of female fan. EXO has the lowest girl supporter. While, Seventeen has the largest fan club of boy then twice has the smallest fan club.Then,

First of all, BTS had the 9000 numbers of female fan and 7000 of male.Blackpink has about 12000 followers compared to other it has most girl fan in this chart. Additionally, 6050 boy fan were there.Then, it has same level of numbers about Women and man in exo respectively, 4000 and 5000.

Next,We can clearly see that In seventeen also it had nearly the same number of friends in compared figures 8000 about male and 7000 almost Girl. In last, 8000 numbers of female fan were there in twice and girl fan is almost 4000.it has the most lowest fan girl relative to.

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seventeen: 3

twice: 3

female: 3

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about: 3

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The report attempts to address the task by describing the number of male and female fans for each band, and it includes an overall statement. However, there are several inaccuracies in the data (e.g., BTS female fans stated as 9000 instead of 9300, EXO figures reversed, TWICE male fans stated as 4000 instead of 4700) and some unclear or contradictory statements (e.g., 'EXO has the lowest girl supporter' but later 'it has same level of numbers about Women and man'). The organization is somewhat disjointed, with informal language and grammatical errors that affect clarity. To improve, ensure accurate data representation, use clearer paragraphing, and maintain a formal, objective tone throughout.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report attempts to organize information by band, but the flow is disrupted by abrupt transitions and unclear referencing. The overall structure lacks clear paragraphing, and the use of cohesive devices is inconsistent. To improve, use clear topic sentences for each paragraph and ensure logical progression from one band to the next. Additionally, avoid informal phrases like 'Then,' and 'Next,' and instead use more formal linking words such as 'In contrast' or 'Furthermore' to enhance readability.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive, with limited range. There are instances of informal language (e.g., 'boy fan', 'girl fan') and awkward phrasing (e.g., 'the most lowest fan girl'). To improve, use more precise and varied vocabulary, such as 'male and female fans' instead of 'boy and girl fans', and 'the highest number' instead of 'the most highest'. Also, avoid informal terms like 'friends' when referring to fans. Expanding your lexical range will make the report more academic and precise. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement issues, incorrect pluralization, and inconsistent tense usage. For example, 'Blackpink had the highest number of female fan' should be 'female fans', and 'it has the most lowest fan girl' is grammatically incorrect. Additionally, punctuation is often missing or misused, and sentence structures are repetitive. To improve, focus on using a wider range of sentence structures, ensuring subject-verb agreement, and proofreading for punctuation and article usage. Practicing with more complex grammatical forms will help elevate the accuracy and range.

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