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Band 7+: The bar graph below represents the data about the clubs joined by the people of two different age groups at a leisure center. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays a bar chart titled "Club preferences by age range", showing the "Number of members" on the vertical axis (from 0 to 70, in increments of 10) across various clubs along the horizontal axis labeled "Name of the club", categorized into two age groups: "25-35" and "55-65". For Gardening, member counts are 25 (25-35) and 55 (55-65). For Photography, both age groups register at 45 members each. For Fitness, counts are approximately 54 (25-35) and 50 (55-65). For Arts and Crafts, counts stand at 60 (25-35) and 20 (55-65). For Music/dance, there are approximately 53 members aged 25-35 and 50 members aged 55-65. For Cycling, members number 65 (25-35) and 10 (55-65).

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The bar graph illustrates the number of members who joined six clubs at a leisure center preferred by age groups 25 to 35 and 55 to 65.

Overall, there was a striking difference in figures for both age groups for gardening, arts and crafts and cycling, while photography, fitness and music/dance clubs had negligible differences.

The number of people belonging to the youngest age group (25 to 35) was significantly higher

than the older age group (55 to 65) for arts and craft, gardening, cycling clubs which accounted a difference of approximately 55, 30 and 40 people respectively. Along with arts and crafts, cycling was least preferred by the older people; however, around 55 people of this age group joined the gardening club, where approximately less than 30 younger people joined that club.

Regarding the other clubs, the figures for both age categories were identical. The photography club had around 45 people, while the other two clubs – fitness and music/dance had enrolled roughly 55 to 50 for both groups.

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Vocabulary Repetition:

clubs: 5

people: 5

joined: 3

groups: 3

gardening: 3

cycling: 3

group: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by presenting an overview and key comparisons between the two age groups across the clubs. The main features are identified, and the data is generally accurate. However, there are a few minor inaccuracies and omissions, such as the exact figures for the differences in arts and crafts, gardening, and cycling, and the phrasing could be clearer in some places. To improve, ensure that all data points are accurately reported and that comparisons are expressed with precision. Additionally, avoid incomplete sentences and aim for a more polished and coherent structure.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is logically organized with a clear introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. The message is generally easy to follow, and the use of cohesive devices is adequate. However, some transitions could be smoother, and the final paragraph could be more clearly linked to the rest of the report. To improve, consider using a wider range of linking words and phrases, and ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate and mostly accurate, with some good attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'striking difference', 'negligible differences'). However, there are a few awkward phrasings and minor inaccuracies (e.g., 'accounted a difference' should be 'accounted for a difference', 'least preferred by the older people' could be more natural). To achieve a higher score, aim for more precise and natural collocations, and avoid repetitive phrasing.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures, including comparative forms and complex sentences. There are a few minor errors and awkward constructions (e.g., 'which accounted a difference' should be 'which accounted for a difference', and the sentence 'Along with arts and crafts, cycling was least preferred by the older people' could be rephrased for clarity). Overall, the grammar is controlled, but more attention to prepositions and sentence structure would enhance accuracy.

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