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Band 4+: The bar graph below shows the number of tourists visiting two different cities by season. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image depicts a bar chart representing the number of tourists in Pover and Troy by season: Spring-Pover 5,000, Troy 10,000; Summer-Pover 15,000, Troy 25,000; Fall-Pover 20,000, Troy 18,000; Winter-Pover 25,000, Troy 5,000.

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The bar graph depicts the no. of people travelled to the two different cities Dover and Troy during the four seasons (spring, summer, fall, winter). The Troy had more visitors in summer and Dover had most of the visitors during winter as compared to others.

Troy was visited by mean about 5,000 people during spring, the number of visitors rise up to about 22,000 during summer. Later it started falling in the fall season and it had the drastic fall in winters.

On the other hand, Dover had the most visitors in winter season, about 25,000 and least visitors in spring season with the difference of 20,000. Moreover, in summer season the no. of visitors is almost half than Troy, in fall season the rise in visitors can be observed.

The difference in no. of visitors tends to be same in both cities, with the average of about 5,000.

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

visitors: 8

season: 5

during: 4

summer: 4

about: 4

dover: 3

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Task Response

5.5

The report adequately addresses the task by summarizing the main features and making comparisons. However, some key information could be more precisely presented for a higher score.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The report's organization is understandable, but the flow could be improved. The numerous grammatical errors negatively impact the overall coherence and cohesion.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate, but a wider range and more precise word choices would enhance the report's sophistication.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors that hinder clarity and fluency. Improved grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score.

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